Reviews for white, surge red |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() God, you're good! I almost missed this chapter! What's wrong with Naru-chan...:3...I wanna know...maybe the Kyuubi's depressed... |
![]() ![]() ...next chapter shouldn’t be too long... And so you said. It's been 2 months. WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER? |
![]() ![]() ![]() O,o (Adds you to author alert list) More soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hnh, I know I already reviewed this chapter, but I forgot to ask this question. I know you might not even answer it, but it's worth a try. In the first chapter, in the scene where Sasuke does the dirty .;; *coughs*, does Naruto not want him to? Or because he is in heat, he wants Sasuke to? Because at certain times (and trust me, I read that part at least 3 times to fully understand it), it seemed like the wild Naruto was just terrified, and that he was fighting. But then in the END of the chapter, Sasuke tells Tsunade that Naruto -wanted- it. So...the clawing and the scratching and the biting meant...what? He wanted it? He didn't? DID WILD NARUTO WANT SASUKE TO DO THAT TO HIM? I'm super confused. Er...And update soon please. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how its not OOCness at all...Sasuke needs to be all angsty and stuff. Yay more chapters |
![]() ![]() ...And again, I say wow. Simply. Your writing style, the details. Everything is so good, and so darn -believable-. I can see this so clearly happening in the anime, so easily. Nothing seems OOC. Sigh, sigh. But I do dread this whole house arrest and lack of chakra thing. I can just -see- Sasuke staring at Naruto in the blond's weakness, in his unconciousness. And then I can see him invading Naruto's home, and once again having his way with him. And the poor Naruto is too weak to do anything. It makes me want to cry. Naruto is such a cute little doll. And Sasuke...Sasuke...I've really come to dislike him, having read the latest manga and seen the latest anime. Or maybe I just think he's horrible and mean and stupid (but truthfully, how can I hate him?). But, in this story, you really make him how he is in the anime, so hateable, and yet, very loveable at the same time. Those guys you love to hate. Or hate to love (wink). ANYWAY, as I said before, this is wonderful, and so is your writing. I still can't get over Division, or -this- story. I really do hope to catch either one of these fics sooner or later. *dies from the sheer amazement of fics* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes Yes dis is good...please continue soon please. |
![]() ![]() Oh My GOD, He's PREGNANT! *Screams in a really high pitched voice* I haven't seen something like this since Doogie Howser. O.o; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sasuke no yaro! How could you do that to cute little Naruto! *whacks Sasu-chan plushie* ahem, sorry about. couldn't help it. This story just makes me want to wring a certain Uchiha's slimy little neck. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Nice Work! _~ |
![]() ![]() yes. that was quite satisfactory i daresay, awesome chapter indeed _ i thought that kakashi from the last paragraphs was actually sasuke with illusion and that he'd somehow make tsunade go away.. o_O you see, you not updating already has got me sprouting out crazy theories! i wanna read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I take that back... sorry, was looking at the wrong place... wow... a lot of reviews there... can't wait to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why there are only 7 reviews, but I myself is highly enjoying the fic, hope to see more adventually, have fun! |
![]() ![]() Love you, love you. _ Hmm...freak? Only if you throw us for a completely wild loop, dear. |
![]() ![]() yes...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! this freaks me out, this fic, i can't get enough of it. i've read it about three or four times, just these three chapters, so i'm getting pretty desparate as you can see. WHAT is sasuke's game? is he really pure evil? does/will he feel anything for naruto? i don't get it, which is why i need an UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() i love it so is naruto pregnat or something hope you update soon |