an angsty sasuke?warfreak naruto?the story's cool and new to i prefer a less emo cant wait for the endng.

Marvelous story !
The characters are very accurate and realistic
Done( if naruto and sasuke got into this mess up sitaution I believe they will have similar reactions too ) Heart broken for dear sasuke and naruto
And I totally didn't expect a baby to pop out
Though I do wonder about mention of the dates/moodswings/arranging of furniture
Sigh... Been quite a long while since you updated ...maybe you will update soon?
XDDDD

Please continue this wonderful story!

I don't usually review unless I feel the need to. So. Where to start...hmm...I loved it. The baby was expected but the scenes leading towards little tadpoles revelation was beautiful lol you're a bit all over the place...but I guess that comes with the territory...aka they aren't right in the head. I expect things would smooth as the story progressed. I expect them to become more mature :) and the last chapter...just wow. So many things I can say regarding, I can't wait to see what happens next so please do try to get soemthing up. Thank you! And hopefully update Soon :)

This is...just ethereal. Perfection. What it really is leaves me at a loss for words. You are a master. Please continue this. I will wait. I can, for such a masterpiece. Bravo.

Pure awsomeness
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I love the way you write, it makes reader more focused on the story and somehow I got the feeling that some things are hinted, not clearly said. Thanks to that story has that mysterious aura around and in my cause I like to tend to think over many moments and thoughts. I hope you get what I mean XD I love your long chapters, the story thanks to that has stability and the progression pace don't change too much ( which is good ). As for you characters, oh damn, it's probably one of the first stories, where the actions, not words describe someone's character, which gives reader possibility to create own vision about them. Sasuke's twisted character was both hard and enjoyable to read, his thoughts was difficult to comprehend, but that's how he is and I'm glad that you didn't force to make him how you want, but just went umm with flow? Naruto is also in character, which his stressful situation, I imagine was hard to write. I'm impressed how you manage write that part by part story made more sense and at critical point everything was comprehensible. I was really really shocked, when you clarified what exactly happened to Naruto and I just was 'wow', like that feeling, when you get at the end of for example Harry Potter book and get to know why all of these things happened and think about yourself as blind, when you had all these hints before you. So you have my admirance for writing it so greatly to make me feel like that. Also generally the often changing of view points bothers me, but in your story I was nearly glad to see when there was descibed what Sasuke's saw, felt and then skipped to Naruto's POV. I'm also happy that there wasn't Sakura bashing, in most of the stories, authors make Ino like holy great character and Sakura as mean bitch. Thanks god that I didn't have to experience it in your story, I'm not sure how everyone cannot remember how Ino was super mean and annoying at the beginning. Sakura ofc had also these moments, but tried later to change and I got the feeling that she beside her mean words, had a soft side, even for Naruto. I'm only confused why Naruto reacted like that to her in latest chapter, was he bothered because both Ino and Sakura are clinging to Sasuke? I thought that he didn't like Ino, because of her mean words. ( yeah, I remember that he was also jealous of her ). Your story is also the first one for me, which deals with reality of having a child, in other stories Naruto quickly or rather too quickly grow accustomed which idea of having a child and don't worry as much as he should. And also they got happy end without any of problems before them, so it sounds like easy thing - having a child.
Thank you so much for writing this amazing story, I really enjoyed reading it and I really hope that you didn't lose interest in it, you got only two chapter and you can finish the story! Make it complete! Hopes that everything is okay ;)

I'm really digging your story. Will this turn out happy in the end or so sad I cry my eyes out? Only time will tell and I'm excited for that time. Please update soon. I really want to know what happens next. Keep up the good work. :)

... Well ... As they say: Your Story, Your Rules...

Please please tell me you are still going to continue this? It's been a while since you updated D: I have my fingers crossed! :D

GAAAH! PLEASE KEEP UPDATING! I BEG OF YOU!

This story is amazing in every sense of the word. I basically did nothing all of yesterday except read this story and what an insanely long adventure that was. And thank you for that. :)

Also, I, for one, am so very glad it's Mpreg. It's just a genre I really, really indulge in. XP

And I don't understand how this story does not have over 1000 reviews yet. It's so well-written and I love Sasuke's and Naruto's relationship. I like how you wrote it because that's probably exactly the way Sasuke and Naruto communicates. Talk without actually ever finishing a sentence because they can basically read each other before the other one does get to finish. And fight when they just can't say it. XD

If I'm reading this correctly, I like how the reason for Sasuke's angst, warped personality, and everything he did so far is because he's too scared to lose (everything) and Naruto goes in as his adorable idiot self and ruins everything Sasuke has planned. Not only that, he beats some sense into Sasuke, like a housewife manhandling her idiot husband. xD I also really liked Naruto's possessiveness. Freaky shit he did to Ino, but loved it.

But, considering how Naruto gave birth, why exactly did he need to eat rats? He obviously wasn't nurturing that baby in his body...was he? So gross. From what I understood, he just made a womb out of thin air with meat, chakra and stuff to make a baby (like the big bang theory). Shouldn't need to eat rats... QQ

And really, Tsunade and the rest of them are seriously oblivious if they couldn't figure out Naruto was pregnant or why he acted the way he does, especially when they figured out he was a "bitch in heat." Haha. It's so sad that it makes it seem like they're dumber than Naruto in that sense. But at least, they were in character all throughout it.

Finally, I really hope you don't plan to leave it at that and the baby will be stuck being called a tadpole forever (in my mind). I know you're probably at that period in life where you have kid(s) and job(s)? and shyt, but I really hope you can finish this story in the next...3 years? That's not asking too much is it? Sorry if it seems really selfish. I just know from other people with young kids that you literally have no time to yourself to do much of anything and I can understand why you have not updated in more than a year. Therefore, I'm just going to pray that you can find some time and have more money so you can finish this story. _ Much love. xoxo.

If the story can't be finished, well, life is more important. Thanks for posting up what you did then. :)

Whoa. Fucked. Up. Majour fuckage. DAMN, dude! But still awsome and cool...

UP-DA-TE!
'Cmon, please, update! One-two chapters of any quality, please?

can you please finish this? thankk you.. its twisted but I love the plot:)