Reviews for Not Mine to Hold
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Yooo, definitely never thought of his behavior that way. That's deep...
spoiled princez chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Aww, this is really nice. If we sat down and thought about it, Shuichi's frequent absences would certainly cause Shiori to worry and get suspicious, despite Shuichi's excuses. After all, she's a mother. She knows when her child is lteling the truth or not. Funny, she knows her child, yet there are still things that are forever hidden from her. Um, you know what I mean. xD

Anyway, this is real good! ;) I loved reading it.
GeEKy-nERd chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is so sad...and well written. Marvelous job. The characterization is just breathtaking.
a chapter 1 . 3/31/2011

It's so good to see fics where Shiori isn't blind to her son's habits, even if she doesn't understand what they mean.
SavitarTheSurfingGod chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Very sad but interesting read, it's true that a mother isn't as oblivious as you think. Mothers may not mention it but they are the ones that truly know you they have watched you since you were a babe. It's sad to think that Shiori is the mother of a Changeling child and she knows and excepts this, and still protects him. Kurama really does remind me of the Changelings from the old stories.
Phlogistics chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
This story was really beautiful. Thank you for writing this!
Ahria chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I loved this. So insightful and beautifully written.
mYtORnsaNDaLs chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
i first commend you for this fic... this is greatly written and i honestly believe that this is exactly how shiori feels whenever Kurama's gone for a mission specially those that takes a long time such as during the daek and makai tournament...

ugh,... this is a heart-breaking truth...
Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Nicely done.

Jocelyn chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Have loved this story for many years, and recently came across it once more. It's a beautiful piece.
pikajay chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Truly one of the most beautiful piece of work involving their mother-and-son relationship. Well done.
Moonlite Knight chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
That was amazing and wonderful and pure genius.
chibi heishi chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
This was... really good. I've wondered why he never seemed to have to deal with an upset or too-curious mother, and this is a beautiful explanation.
kkk chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
very nicely portrayed. it's really heart warming and sad at the same time. was very nice to read.
shackleton chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
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