|Reviews for May or Misty an AAMayL|
| Lover of Pokemon chapter 5 . 4/19/2015
It's been almost 10 years...yeah your comp crashed, but could you rewrite the ending? Also, could you send me a link to your serebii profile? I looked up your username but couldn't find it. I hope you write new fanfiction (like the ones you talk about in your profile) soon.
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2014
After they ate they all ate their meals MISTAKE
| IceMaster1928 chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
More chapters we need it need it
| IceMaster1928 chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
It was great until Misty showed up but I bet it's gonna get better
| jeff tingerty chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
Good one, keep up the suspence!
Put in more confusion where Ash starts to like Misty.
Try to include a fight between Misty and May over Ash in front of everyone, and Max tries to break it up, but he can't, so they settle it on a pokemon fight
Make it a good one ;)
| plattytehpwn chapter 5 . 1/30/2013
Please update... although I know it's highly unlikely this story will ever be finished, even if it is only a few chapters away from the conclusion.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
F*** misty. I mean DON'T f*** misty. she doesn't deserve a child.
| Hydreigon101 chapter 5 . 9/20/2012
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2012
| Angel the Hedgehog 10 chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
this is awesome! you have got to update this fast! I'm getting too excited! WHEN IS IT COMING! THUMBS UP! good work!
| I am the weirdo chapter 5 . 9/4/2010
u r fabulus
| imafangirlforever chapter 5 . 7/17/2010
Hurry and update! It been six years 6!
| Eloroy chapter 5 . 3/14/2009
| Eloroy chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
How do I add a story to your communitiy?
| LittleMissMidnight chapter 5 . 7/19/2008
I like this story.
Plz update soon!