Reviews for Dawning
Guest chapter 18 . 4/27/2020
I think I’ve reread this story several times since it’s been completed and I still love it each read. I wish there was a sequel TT
Sak chapter 18 . 3/7/2020
Itachi is the spy wow
Nice chapter. Thanks for your time!
Sak chapter 17 . 3/7/2020
I loved their confessions and their nervousness and it was all very real and very sweet. Well it wasn't too sweet and for that I'm glad
Sak chapter 16 . 3/7/2020
Superb chapter. Really well done. Totally enjoying!
I don't love Temari but awwww
Sak chapter 15 . 3/7/2020
Omg so much stress and tension and battle scenes! Very well done!
Childbirth! You can do it Sakura! I wonder how they'll complete their mission of kill demon baby?
Sak chapter 14 . 3/7/2020
I love the different pov and enjoyed the fights! Wow very well done!
Sak chapter 13 . 3/7/2020
You write every scene so well!
Totally tense
Sak chapter 12 . 3/7/2020
Omg.
What a debate. As a woman I was siding with Shikamaru. Thanks for keeping him shirtless and sakura distracted by it mmhmm.
Omg.
Itachi?
Sak chapter 11 . 3/7/2020
Shikamaru could have said a bit more... Like he was wanting her.. so bad. . Haha... Ok ok he said he wanted to kiss her and more and I will be happy with that..
You wrote Sakuras anger very well
Sak chapter 10 . 3/7/2020
Omg Temari is too much! Asking questions that are way too personal.
And now ugh Sasuke knows about Ataksukiiiii
Sak chapter 9 . 3/7/2020
Omg kisho ist terrible.
But their kiss was so good again. Shikamaru is so dreamy ;)
Sak chapter 8 . 3/7/2020
Oh it was going so well! And then he apologized for kissing her for reals.
Sotto Voce I think might be your favourite phase
Sak chapter 7 . 3/7/2020
O la la sexy!
And the restaurant guy was such a jerk
Sak chapter 6 . 3/6/2020
Hehe I like them feeling their date feelings!
Sak chapter 5 . 3/6/2020
So has she cut her hair yet?
Shikamaru is definitely sexy!
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