Reviews for Dawning
CoffeeClubVIP chapter 3 . 11/13/2004
Ah! Don't leave it there! PLease please please update as soon as possible! This is a pairing I've been going crazy to read and this story is fantastic but please please continue it soon! Keep up the great work!
jellybeansinabottle chapter 3 . 11/13/2004
ShikaSaku plz...
Ciastor chapter 3 . 11/12/2004
*pounces on this chapter!* Yes, you updated! This chapter's ending was too too good! Ahh... if only some of my friends in real life also realized Shikamaru's advice..
kookey chapter 2 . 11/10/2004
I read this on Sugoiweb and decided to leave a review here.

Firstly, a ShikamaruSakura story? Wow! I've been looking for one for AGES! *bows at your feet*

Secondly, Sasuke can go freakin' screw himself. What an ass. *glares*

And lastly, you've got a really good beginning so far. I love Shika. He's so yummy. *chew chew*

I hope you continue soon! Keep it up.
lynnxlady chapter 2 . 11/10/2004
Cool. I don't like ShikaSaku, but I don't particularly dislike it either, and this looks like the beginning to a nice plotty story. Mission fics (when ninjas do ninja-y things) make me happy.
Youkolvr chapter 2 . 11/9/2004
I really like your stoy so far, I really like Shikamaru and Sakura. I hope you will please update soon and keep up the excelent work. If you write cyoa's you could go to
Thunk chapter 2 . 11/7/2004
And characterization. :) You've got plot and characterization and research down pat.

I love how well you write Shikamaru. lol. I laughed outloud a couple times during this chapter! You're so good at pegging his personality!
Thunk chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
Ah, del. So few actually write this intelligently. You've already got this awesome plot going, and the romance isn't anywhere in sight yet. So much story, so much research, so much background. The ball is rolling from the very first scene. Great pacing, too.
jellybeansinabottle chapter 2 . 11/1/2004
Is this going to be a ShikaSaku fic? o.O Keep up the gd wrk neways! :)
Tydepul chapter 2 . 10/31/2004
I'm impressed. You're keeping so many details straight. This looks like it'll turn out pretty good. )
Tench-Sama chapter 2 . 10/31/2004
I like it. I like it a lot.
Malitia chapter 2 . 10/31/2004
o0o0o00o this seems like such a good story, i hoppe u update soon! is tehre gonna be action between sakura and shika? ughghhg that would be so awesome.. CONTINUE!

Ciastor chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
Very interesting beginning... I'm intrigued, so please keep writing! I love this particular alt. pairings too.
Pickled Death chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
Saa~! _ Deleria-sama enters the Naruto fandom! I am a happy camper. I thoroughly enjoy your work; you really are a talented author. (It's kind of sad. I've been watching your profile and sugoiweb for just WHEN you'd be posting this... [shifty eyes])

With the foreknowledge that my judgment does not reign supreme, I can safely say that this chapter was quite intriguing and well-executed, a bridge into a much deeper plot. And Sasuke...was just so mean. Damn Sasuke. That seems like the exact thing he'd do. -_-;

It's good that you acknowledge that not everyone would be a jounin at this age, by chance or by choice.

Kiba, you buttmonkey. ;-;

XD Can't wait for the second chapter to pop up. Just...amazing work, as usual. I'd expect nothing less. _
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