Reviews for Love Hina: Of Friendship, Love, and Honor
AegisX-TAIL chapter 13 . 2/17/2006
cool fic, just finished readin' through.
Mantis Man chapter 13 . 1/15/2006
Quite the foreshadow build-up here. The apparently growing dissention amongst the Motoko Fan Club could make for some VERY interesting conflicts down the road. So many possibilities *_*V
Rioes chapter 13 . 1/11/2006
So the plot starts to finally come out! Snazzy story so far I dare say. Looking forward to more!
vegeto18 chapter 13 . 12/27/2005
great story innortal.

update as soon as you can. can't wait to see this 3rd battle.
Reader chapter 13 . 11/24/2005
this is a really good story. i would like to read more of it soon. i did see a few mistakes along the whole way, and ill see if i could go back to them and tell you what i thought they were. you're a really good writer. i've had many laughs and enjoyment from this one story. so...WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER QUICKLY! I WANT MORE!
Drekk chapter 13 . 11/3/2005
damn now thats a cliff hanger if I ever saw one!

Nice twist on the whole motoko and keitaro love theme.

looking foreward to the next up date. don't take to long

the anticipation is killing me.
dogbertcarroll chapter 13 . 10/31/2005
-Maybe I can clone him? That would make everyone happy.

-Everyone gets their own clone of Keitaro! They each get

-the ronin they love!

I just had the weirdest thought. Cloning him and adding

a bit of DNA from each of the girls so they wouldn't be

truly identical. Having them at the right age and with

matching attitudes for each of the girls.

That would be weird.
dogbertcarroll chapter 12 . 10/30/2005
ROTFLMAO!
dogbertcarroll chapter 11 . 10/30/2005
-Heaven help her if it was, in fact, some wet dream by her ancestors.

-Because those two would raze the school and every member of the two

-clans, should it be wrong.

LOL!

-The fate of so many rests on his shoulders.

-They are all so fucked!

I love this fic. It has some of the best lines.
dogbertcarroll chapter 10 . 10/30/2005
-Now relax and enjoy the tediousness of high school math. Otherwise,

-I know of one former warrior who told the absolute most boring

-stories you will ever here. Should I let him communicate with you?

LOL!

-‘The sword’s no longer evil’ he says.

-No longer evil my ass!

ROTFLMAO!

I love that sword.
dogbertcarroll chapter 9 . 10/30/2005
-glad that they both seemed to smile a little at his jester

-before he left the room.

glad that they both seemed to smile a little at his gesture

before he left the room.

Some great story ideas. I favor #5.
dogbertcarroll chapter 8 . 10/30/2005
-She looked at him, noticing his ragged breathing, as well as how

-little ki his body was admitting.

She looked at him, noticing his ragged breathing, as well as how

little ki his body was emitting.

-But we would have been happy with whoever he picked, as long as

-it wasn’t Haruka.

LOL!
dogbertcarroll chapter 7 . 10/30/2005
Onii-san, you are so different. Motoko continued to stare at her

brother as the made their way up the stairs to Hinatasou.

Onii-san, you are so different. Kanako continued to stare at her

brother as the made their way up the stairs to Hinatasou.

-I guess that makes you a redneck Keitaro.

LOL!

-Be honest, did you ever... You know...

-Keitaro quickly headed for the bathroom, trying to keep anymore

-blood from flying out of his nose.

-Thought so.

LOL! That is one perverted sword.
dogbertcarroll chapter 4 . 10/30/2005
-I knew you used your own energy for those attacks against use.

“I knew you used your own energy for those attacks against us.

Interesting bit with the cursed sword. Why did it take so long

for his leg to heal?
dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 10/30/2005
-But there was only quit.

But there was only quiet.

Excellent ep.
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