|Reviews for The Sword and the Spear|
| Seaouryou chapter 4 . 10/17/2004
Ah, it's nice to read some good old yuri.
The only critique I can think of is the use of '-sama', since they are in China at the time and wouldn't be using Japanese honorifics.
| Sadistic Memory chapter 4 . 10/16/2004
you sent all of these chapters out too fast. how are you going to get reviews in a tactical wat? lol
| Meep chapter 4 . 10/16/2004
o... good story... Actually... before this story, I've never really though of those two as a coulple...
Nice of you to give us some historical background as well! The only thing that I can think of criticizing is the part where the scholar wrote "inu youkai" and "youkai", because as you said, the lengend was written by a scholar from China, but the scholars wouldn't have used Japanese words, right?
...unless my mind's playing tricks on me and it's written by a Japanese person, which in that case, ignore what I've wrote above.
| robochar chapter 4 . 10/16/2004
Woh...just...woh. That was awesome! You really dove into these characters and showed every little detail of them and it was just amazing! The amount of research and stuff really also added as everything was to the period. That just took my breath away. And the romance was done fantasicly. I really loved how much detail you put into it and how well it all came together. This fic was just purely awesome and I love it so much. Go Ruri/Hari!
| Skittlez chapter 4 . 10/16/2004
YAY FOR RURIHARI!
I havent read ANY of it and this was great! Lovely, write more Ruri/Hari soon!
| wicked schmoness chapter 4 . 10/16/2004
i'm sorry about this, but last review i made a mistake. I watched the FIRST movie. ehh. _
Anyway, lovely ending. _
| wicked schmoness chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
hmm! i saw the scond movie, but inever thought of ruri and hari that way.. good job so far! _ i really like this one.
| Canned Sword Fish chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Woo~ I love those characters
| Shadow's Mirror chapter 4 . 10/16/2004
Beautiful. A lovely story written with grace and sensitivity.
Good luck in the contest!