Reviews for BEHIND ENEMY LINES: Whsipers of Fear
John Moore chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
As the director of the original movie, I would like to say "great work,". It is tremendous fun to see people keep this story alive over a decade later!
Skipper96 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
That was really good, I loved the details!
Savannah Rivers chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Now this is a good .Everything!It was cool!
Markos chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Story is good. Writing is terrible. Hard to enjoy good story if I cannot read writing.

Learn to construct simple English sentence. Use same tense all time, not switch to past and present. Even I capitalize words right. You do not. Also learn punctuation. Is important.

Also use chapter feature in system. You should not post chapters as separate stories. Sometimes admins take down stories if not chapters.
alienhunter chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
whoa, you have wonderful writing talent, that's excellent, and your descriptions are so vivid! I like, can't wait to read the next chapter!

-alienhunter
kokomocalifornia chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
hey buddy good story. a little confusing at times, but it will sort itself out the more u update. so update asap! by the by, whats with only accepting signed reviews? :)