|Reviews for City Lights|
| janet1982 chapter 9 . 7/20/2010
| Jayallen chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
I think that your plot is very good, but your transitions are really fast and a little sloppy. You seem to jump from one seen to the next and don't really explain or differentiate the jumps. Also why didn't nick have his gun? Very good idea though and I look forward to what will come next.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/13/2006
OKie it was a cool story...but... you shoulda made it longer put more details into it. Other then that good story! I mean i read it in like 15 mins.
| karmine chapter 9 . 2/3/2006
i love your story!
| sokerfreek922 chapter 9 . 3/2/2005
I thought it was ok, i really think u should make a sequel, i want to see how mich turns out.
| 13CC chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
Ooh! Good begining. I think I'll read the rest now. See ya in my next review!
| Dumbeblondi02 chapter 9 . 1/10/2005
You should totally do a sequel. Great story!
| XanDutch chapter 9 . 1/3/2005
Er... *raises hopefully inoffensive hand* Whatever happened to the little girl and the old lady?
| higherbeingfriendsfan chapter 9 . 1/1/2005
I absolutely loved this fic, and personally I would love to read a sequel about Nick's recovery, hope you get enough support to do one:)
Happy New Yearx
| fwe chapter 9 . 1/1/2005
I'm not so sure I like your writing style but I like your plot. So good job.
| Space-Case7029 chapter 9 . 12/31/2004
Good story. Would be interesting to read a sequel. Maybe have the other character's views on Nick and maybe a little romance?
| Casey chapter 9 . 12/31/2004
Dude your story kicks butt, you so have to do a sequel
| A.Remains chapter 9 . 12/31/2004
It was okay.
If you do a sequel please don't make a slash.
| Jewelbaby chapter 9 . 12/31/2004
plz do a Sequel. I wanna see more of Nick and Greg's bond.
| Franny2 chapter 8 . 12/29/2004
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE where's the rest?
Just discover this story and I want to know what's happening!
Please give me more.
Great story. Waiting for the rest..
Have a wonderfull inspiring writing evening