Reviews for The Twenty Fifth Rule
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
This was just so beautiful. My throat is tightening from jnhead tears at the raw emotions bring displayed.
Holy shytt.
This was amazing! I've been looking for good Kakashi/Iruka fics. I was lucky to stumble upon this because of bea-chan's recs. I was glad to have read this, it was written very well.
ahgghghajdrvcgdn chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
That was beautiful, I almost! But I didn't...

Okay I did.



But that was inspiring. You're a very talented writer. :3

I lurve it.


It makes me fuzzy inside.

TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Wow. Just wow.
dreamcatcher on LJ chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
That was a very touching scene between the two, with a solid foundation used to allow them to interact. A very satisfying story, thank you.
Kaorots chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
"Stop. This isn't the place for this,"

This, my dear, and many others little details in your story, is what makes fanfictions, usual whose goal is only to pair two characters together (something seen all too much on the net) a GOOD work : incredibly good characterisation, a writing that flows well and an excellent grasp of the shinobi world by Kishimoto : it could have been angsty; you made it REAL.

Thank you for this.
Kwala chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
loved it
RandomTopic chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Wait, how did Kakashi share the memory?

I liked this, especially the ending.
Heynick chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
ah! so cute! but so manyof your stories are! lol keep it up!LOVE Heynick
Jane chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
just wanted to acknoledge how much I enjoyed this! Loads and loads of kudos to you :)

It was so powerful and touching, and pulled off so effortlessly too! You orchestrated a really emotionally and powerful scene without making anyone out of character, and it was just really enjoyable. _
Midnight Promise chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Very good story, it waws very well written and emotional.

Great job on the characters. I loved it.

ViciousFilly chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Awe. Very very good. Thank you much.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
I dunno why but that made me cry :)

Good stuff, all the rest of these are excellent too.
rhythmia chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
This was amazing, and moving. An incredibly well-done character piece, I completely didn't expect the turns it would take. You've got Iruka and Kakashi spot on. I like the way you utilized the bridge scene, and having Kakashi's sharingan also able to transfer memories. All the little details together blew me away- the use of chakra, what Iruka observed, their banter, the view of things from inside Iruka's head like his relationship to the Third and the little observation about Kakashi's teleportation- it gave me the feel of a slice of a complete and thought out world.

Brava, your story was really good and compelled me to comment. Made me cry, but that's a compliment! ;;
AceRimmer chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
By the end of this piece I was left in awe. This is what fanfiction should be like. Thank you for sharing this. I'm not even ashamed to say that my eyes welled up with tears at one point. Please continue your great work.
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