Reviews for Veela Child, Moon Child
RedHeadsRock1010 chapter 6 . 4/12
I thought this would be one of the rare stories where both mates are equal... guess not. I can't see Draco as the cliche "bottom" as people call it
Guest chapter 18 . 3/27
Someone said they don't understand why Draco is mean to Amy . Hello did you read she tried to rape him one summer
Guest chapter 18 . 2/27
Ur story had such an interesting start... N den u went on and on with harry n Draco self-righteous secretive marriage...wtf! How are people supposed to know someone is married?! How is anyone supposed to make assumptions on a social status like that?! It's not like getting a boob job! So yeah wtf! They never even gave a chance to the families...if d malfoys n potters were dark it was another matter, all thru out Ur story u dropped little hints of their devotion. Eg: Lucius kept apologising to Draco after making his son meet Voldy, Lucius n narcissa's devotion to each other, d potters n deir devotion to each other! Boohoo! Bit Ur character development sucks! It felt like d drarry couple n deir friends live in lala land where everyone's worldview is wrong but dem!? Like wth? Also u developed Harry's power for over 15 chapters n d battle scene with Voldy was like 6 lines? Wth? Just coz someone is quiet does not make them righteous! U made all D outspoken people enemies here. This story sounded like a teenage vendetta! N wich parent after spending so much to send their son to an expensive international school wud never meet their child even once. Hahah wtf! Who is paying the fucking fees?! R u kidding me? Who signs d parental consent forms? This story was just an exercise in juvenile n spiteful control freaking! N wht is with Ur height alterations? First d drarry couple r giants 6'7 n 6'6 and suddenly they're dwarfs with harry being 5'8 n Draco even shorter? Plz be specific. And on dat note, both d malfoys n potters had mixing with creature blood to get stronger... Why then was it suddenly so difficult to just say I'm a veela or I'm a Draconian? It was esp. strange 4 potters since lily was a mudblood herself. N if malfoys only aimed for power, n mixing with creature blood was abt dat...why d sudden Draco malfoy reluctance to share his veela story to his parents who clearly adored him. In the first chapter u even made Lucius or narcissa say dat all 3 of the potter children cud be Draco's future spouse. Plz reread Ur own story...
AngelMira chapter 10 . 2/17
I was so disappointed Draco was the bottom. Now I can't read this story anymore.
K chapter 18 . 1/22
I loved this.. prim example of a great creature story
KagomeGirl021 chapter 18 . 8/29/2017
Will there ever be more of this fic? I am loving it and it's so different from any other I have read! I would love to see the look on the parents' faces if they were to find out about what amy tried to do to draco. I would also love to see more children pop up from Adrian, blaise, and we'll all the friends really! Also what has become of the weasely kids? Will the potter parents and Malfoy parents ever reconcile with harry and draco? What will they think if they find out about Adrian' s marriage since he eloped and if he will have kids soon also. Please do write more soon.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/24/2017
Still here
UnusuallyZealousBurgette chapter 18 . 3/17/2017
SSOOO GOOODDD! At first I thought the slash was a bit weird at first and almost stipped reading, but I'm really glad that I didn't! Loved the whole Draconian/Veela thing, very creative. One comment, though, remembering all those characters was very difficult at first.
SerpensPrincess chapter 13 . 12/1/2016
loving it.
Guest chapter 18 . 10/7/2016
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Bella chapter 18 . 9/25/2016
I'll be honest I don't like sub Draco fanfics but this fanfic is amazing :D
AJ Picard chapter 18 . 8/31/2016
This story is absolutely fantastic and funny. I hope that you are going to continue. I would like to see the after effects of Harry and Draco's little announcement.
track1swimming2tennis3 chapter 18 . 8/3/2016
To be a little lacking she wasn't that mean just kinda flaky and vapid. Why was draco so mean to here at the end of the story? It just made me angry at draco for being mean to somebody that generally wasn't that bad.
track1swimming2tennis3 chapter 18 . 8/3/2016
This story was great, but I found Amy's character
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
When i found out that draco is a sub i just stopped reading, its just not right
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