Reviews for Veela Child, Moon Child
my sugacube chapter 6 . 7/17/2022
As a Brazilian I can properly say that Débora is a very common stereotype, but it's not wrong and for foreigners interested in the dance she was doing is called "forró", search Zé Vaqueiro on YouTube
15oyaleganati chapter 18 . 2/8/2022
It is so sad that you're not completed I'm really enjoying this fanfic and I think you are an amazing writer thank you for writing this
Larissa chapter 18 . 3/9/2021
Simplesmente maravilhosa amei sério
Pena que meu inglês e ruim .
Pois amei
Shadows Curse chapter 18 . 11/22/2019
I love your story!
leopardblack chapter 18 . 3/27/2019
Love it! Absolutely perfect.
darkpercy5 chapter 18 . 3/10/2019
Please continue. I Love it.
malita23 chapter 18 . 11/6/2018
can u make a version of this where Harry is pregnant instead because he is more magically powerful then Draco and Draco is more Physically strong then harry
RedHeadsRock1010 chapter 6 . 4/12/2018
I thought this would be one of the rare stories where both mates are equal... guess not. I can't see Draco as the cliche "bottom" as people call it
Guest chapter 18 . 3/27/2018
Someone said they don't understand why Draco is mean to Amy . Hello did you read she tried to rape him one summer
Guest chapter 18 . 2/27/2018
Ur story had such an interesting start... N den u went on and on with harry n Draco self-righteous secretive! How are people supposed to know someone is married?! How is anyone supposed to make assumptions on a social status like that?! It's not like getting a boob job! So yeah wtf! They never even gave a chance to the families...if d malfoys n potters were dark it was another matter, all thru out Ur story u dropped little hints of their devotion. Eg: Lucius kept apologising to Draco after making his son meet Voldy, Lucius n narcissa's devotion to each other, d potters n deir devotion to each other! Boohoo! Bit Ur character development sucks! It felt like d drarry couple n deir friends live in lala land where everyone's worldview is wrong but dem!? Like wth? Also u developed Harry's power for over 15 chapters n d battle scene with Voldy was like 6 lines? Wth? Just coz someone is quiet does not make them righteous! U made all D outspoken people enemies here. This story sounded like a teenage vendetta! N wich parent after spending so much to send their son to an expensive international school wud never meet their child even once. Hahah wtf! Who is paying the fucking fees?! R u kidding me? Who signs d parental consent forms? This story was just an exercise in juvenile n spiteful control freaking! N wht is with Ur height alterations? First d drarry couple r giants 6'7 n 6'6 and suddenly they're dwarfs with harry being 5'8 n Draco even shorter? Plz be specific. And on dat note, both d malfoys n potters had mixing with creature blood to get stronger... Why then was it suddenly so difficult to just say I'm a veela or I'm a Draconian? It was esp. strange 4 potters since lily was a mudblood herself. N if malfoys only aimed for power, n mixing with creature blood was abt dat...why d sudden Draco malfoy reluctance to share his veela story to his parents who clearly adored him. In the first chapter u even made Lucius or narcissa say dat all 3 of the potter children cud be Draco's future spouse. Plz reread Ur own story...
AngelMira chapter 10 . 2/17/2018
I was so disappointed Draco was the bottom. Now I can't read this story anymore.
K chapter 18 . 1/22/2018
I loved this.. prim example of a great creature story
KagomeGirl021 chapter 18 . 8/29/2017
Will there ever be more of this fic? I am loving it and it's so different from any other I have read! I would love to see the look on the parents' faces if they were to find out about what amy tried to do to draco. I would also love to see more children pop up from Adrian, blaise, and we'll all the friends really! Also what has become of the weasely kids? Will the potter parents and Malfoy parents ever reconcile with harry and draco? What will they think if they find out about Adrian' s marriage since he eloped and if he will have kids soon also. Please do write more soon.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/24/2017
Still here
UnusuallyZealousBurgette chapter 18 . 3/17/2017
SSOOO GOOODDD! At first I thought the slash was a bit weird at first and almost stipped reading, but I'm really glad that I didn't! Loved the whole Draconian/Veela thing, very creative. One comment, though, remembering all those characters was very difficult at first.
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