Reviews for Between Friends
raphfan1 chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
This is excellent,more please
SweeterSin chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
I loved this, it had a very good flow to it and nothing too hardcore or too low...beautiful!
SIMBUYO chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
Ignoring that this is a TMNT fanfic, this is the exact situation that happens to so many people that care for each other but not enough to form a full relationship. beautifully written, and it's a major plus that it's TMNT. Amazing work!
Sarah chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
That was so perfect! I've had a little crush on Raphael myself ;) I'd kill to be like April, exploring him like that. Great job!
dessanyjayjay12 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
I am so in love with this story , I wish there was more chapters though ! (:
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
toed-mater chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
More april & raph
Toonytoons1 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
BlueMonkWanderer chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Wow! This was GREAT! April may have been OOC, but I liked this story very much! And I can soo see Mike getting his hands on some old porn magazines that were left in garbage cans, HAHAHA! I see him hiding them from Master Splinter so he doesnt get in trouble LOL! XD
Renee werewolf chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I don't know if I ever reviewed this story, but I LOVE it. It would be interesting, (and its only a idea of mine) but it would be interesting if you add 3 more chapters, one each for the turtles. Like I said, just a wild idea I had.
chaitea16 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Sweet and still believable. Ralf felt a little forced in a few places, but otherwise you pulled him off pretty well considering the plot.
cabrera1234 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
can you write of of this
Mrs. Optimus Prime chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
AWE! So sweet! I'm glad the two got out okay. Great job on this fic! Raph has always been my favorite. Great job!
Alaer Kino chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
"Why are these words so big?" (as Mikey said in the time-hopping episode from Fast Forward) Hehee, just kidding. :) You used a lot of words most don't from what I read for TMNT fics. And this was a one-shot, extra sweet as I usually only read one-shot fics .

You did Raph's character really well; all tough and rough, but yearns to be gentle and loved (so cute!). April was great too, she does act like that .

I originally thought they were really going to do it all the way, but you surprised me (which doesn't happen too often for me in fics, as I predict most fairly well). Quite a refreshing read .

I could imagine it all in my head and when that happens, it means the fic is very well-written and worthy to be made into a movie or something like that (if I had the money and power to do so, the things I could do would make entertainment history and a lot of writers happy). :D

Thanks for showing me the link, I really enjoyed the story! I hope you like my April X Raph fic 'Raph's Throe' as much as I liked your fic :)
RPM Shadow chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
I like it!
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