Reviews for Cosmopolitan Girl
Con-Artist643 chapter 21 . 11/30/2012
oh damn lol I don't care what day of the year it is I would have busted some butts if my cousins or nephew destroyed my room. XD
Bookits chapter 6 . 8/17/2010
Osiran Duelist chapter 32 . 10/19/2009
Rockin story! Keep up the good work!
Inspired.Butterfly chapter 21 . 5/5/2009
Wow...sorry to say, but I didn't read much of your chapter...more like skim through it. Sorry, but I really don't like kissing parts...

Well, onto the next one...

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 20 . 5/5/2009
Yay! More! :)

Wow...that was really unexpected...I thought the store owner was going to be her grandma or something lol :3

Huh? Charybdis knows Marik? Hm...interesting...very interesting...

Ha, I'd be surprised if someone was dating a 'dead' 4,0 or so year old matter how HOT he is...*clears throat* Erm...moving on...

Creepy voice *shudders* well, onto the next one! :)

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 19 . 5/4/2009
Haha...Charybdis' little 'mind thing' reminds me of something off a show I watched once...:3

Haha...that's funny...kissing her on the cheek...nice going Yami...:3

"Say No! Say No Yami!" Haha...he's such a nice guy...I'm actually surprised that she doesn't act more like he's a famous guy that he is...I would be like TOTALLY like that all the time...I'd feel like inferior to him :3 lol

Aw cute! Yami gave Ray his signature! :) That's so cute! :)

Wow...what a sneak! How evil of :/

Well, onto the next chapter! Yay! :)

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 18 . 5/4/2009
WHAT? She actually STOPPED Yami? Wow...unexpected...0.o

(But, I'm kinda happy :)

What a weirdo...slapping herself uncontrollably :/ strange she is...

Oh Lord...he kissed her? Man...that's just REALLY awkward...0.o

What? She didn't CARE if Tea saw them? I'd be freaked out...and it's just SO's like she's kissing Yugi as :S

Oh brother...I can just picture Duke trying to act all 'cool' full of himself...but I still love the guy! :)

"The Basic"? that like the Matrix? lol :) was funny to me...:3

Wow...she's gonna look scary...:3 lol (there I go with the 'lol's again...sorry...-_-')

How she refers to him as the "Sex God" kinda weird...not gonna lie...(and not to bash your writing or anything...sorry...I'm just very blunt...not one of my best qualities...:3)

“You didn’t have to, you’re fine the way you were before.” THAT'S the Yami I know! :) I have to start watching Yu-Gi-Oh again...I'm like REALLY wanting to watch it now...

Yay, onto the next chapter I go! :)


P.S:I hope you're not too annoyed by my large number of reviews...I just think reviewing is like giving people a compliment, and it's the least I can do for someone who lets me read their awesome story! :) (too cheesy?
Inspired.Butterfly chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
Yay! More! (Wow...I always put that...:/ lol)

Hm...that would REALLY suck. I sometimes find myself drooling when I embarrassing...-_-'

Wow...she wanted to go after he was all sweet and told her he needed to tell her something? Sheesh...:) lol

Oh man...I REALLY LOVE Yami's voice on the English series...LOVE it! It's so deep...and Yugi's is well...erm...OK lol :3

(drool drool-here we go again) :3 lol I'd be like that as well! :P

Haha, a waitress WOULD come up to Ryou...he's just TOO cute! :)

Man, what a beautiful necklace from Yami (I imagine...since I can't actually see it) :3 lol

Haha...I was thinking that Yami would never do that...I was starting to worry :3 lol

NO! Another daydream I wonder?'s not that I don't WANT them to's just that I can't really picture Yami making the first move, you know?

Wow...I sure do say 'lol' a lot...sorry about that...:/

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 16 . 5/4/2009
NO! Not Yami! My poor Yami...*hugs Yami* :S Man...Bakura is SUCH A JERK!

Man...took the shot for Yami...what a trooper! :)

Why do you always have to end it when I want to keep reading? Lol...I'm going crazy!

Well, I just hope that you're having a good week...and having fun writing more stories (if you are :D)

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 15 . 5/4/2009
More! :) I've like become obsessed with reading a few chapters every that totally pathetic? lol Sorry, I always get like that when I have a good story to read :3

Oh snap...detention. That sucks...but Joey's there! And they finally made up! That's so sweet! :) I love Joey again :3 lol

WHAT? STUCK IN THE SHADOW REALM BECAUSE OF BAKURA? HOW FREAKY IS THAT? Wow...I wish you would've put more detail into it...but that's Ok...but Charybdis told Yami she liked...LOVED him! Oh man...awkward...0.o

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 14 . 5/4/2009
Yay! Date with Yami! :) Erm...meeting? Whatever...

Holy cow...her eyes DO need some checking's practically blind lol Probably from walking into all those telephone poles :3

Oh snap! I LOVE this kind of dramatic action! Being thugged with Yami coming to her rescue! *sighs* I love Yami :) lol

WHAT? Yami shouldn't do that! Send people to the shadow realm...NO! Why Yami? Why?

No! Don't tell him, Charybdis! That would ruin it! :/

Haha sorry...too dramatic...Well, until next time! :)

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 13 . 5/4/2009
Yay! More!

Aw! I LOVE Yami moments! Aw...and he wiped the tear away, too! I'm SO jealous...even though it's a cartoon lol :3

Haha...I like her grandma...she seems funny :3

Wait...her sister can see Yami too? I thought only Charybdis and her grandma could see 'spirits'...Now I'm confused...

Oh man! She's getting attacked by fan girls! Erm...her grandma? Weird...:3 lol

Aw...why won't Joey talk to her? What a jerk! :P lol


P.S:As you probably can already tell, I LOVE your story so far! It really does brighten my day...:3
Inspired.Butterfly chapter 12 . 5/4/2009
Yay! It wasn't Yami who kissed Tea! Great! OK sorry...but I was hoping it wasn't him! :)

Yay, Seto in this chapter too? I miss the tough/mean guy...:3

Haha, that'd be me. Getting lost in Kaiba Corp...I have a bad sense of direction :3 lol

Oh snap! Kaiba is probably pissed at her...but I say YOU GO GIRL! Show Kaiba how much of a jerk he is! :) lol

Oh man...that's not a magazine and everything...

WHAT? MARRIAGE? I really hope that he's being sarcastic...that's just plain CREEPY! 0.o

Man, it ended again! Darn; hate when that happens! :D lol

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 11 . 5/4/2009
Yay! I get to continue on! :)


Man...this sucks...I wanted Charybdis and Yami to be together! What kind of crap is this? lol Sorry...a bit upset here...

Anywho, onto the next chapter I go! :)

Inspired.Butterfly chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
Wow...was a bit nervous when I read the title "Flirting Is Fun" but quickly got over it because I wanted to read the next chapter! :3 lol

Ha, that'd be me dueling Yami/Yugi. I'd lose like RIGHT away...I suck at it...:3 lol

Oh, NOW I get the title of the chapter :3 lol But, I really hope she doesn't 'make a move' on Yami/'d be like 'making a move' on both of them...0.o

Oh man...that didn't work out too well (as I predicted) :3 lol

Well, onto the next chapter I go! Wait, don't tell him! No! :/

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