|Reviews for Child of Grace|
| Slytherclaw17 chapter 53 . 4/27/2016
Hello Azar, this is about my sixth or so time reading this amazing composed by you and I've already left a review on the final chapter so here this review lies in the second to last chapter. I would like for you to know that this is a spectacular story and I have never read anything like it. Meaning it's a shame that you've abandoned it. You might have abandoned your profile meaning you might not even be able to read this but oh well. Anywho even though you have left this story, I am grateful that you've left it up for fans to enjoy again and again. I do wonder if anyone has remade the story, but I doubt they would be able to compete. I would like to ask for you to continue the story, but I respect your wishes of abandoning it. Not to mention in your profile you said so yourself that you aren't taking requests and this is, technically, a request. I am sad that you won't continue the story, purely because you managed to reach a brilliant point in the story. Great cliffhanger. The story has taught me quite a lot about life, love, friendship, and a lot of other things. Thanks for writing it :)
| AudrawhiteSarahESavageusagi chapter 54 . 4/12/2016
So sad it's now a dead story as it's quite good.
| Guest chapter 54 . 4/5/2016
NooOOOOOoooooOOOOooo I can't believe this is a dead story! It's soooo good D:
| Alex chapter 9 . 3/9/2016
This is just brilliant! :)
| ExtraSyrupPlease chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
I've read some of your later works and you definitely have come a long way since writing this. It's good to see a writer who acknowledges their flaws and tries to improve. However, it's unfortunate that there are so many reviews consisting of nothing but glowing praise and requests to continue the story - apparently they missed the note that it's not going to be. They should check out your more recent stories instead.
In the interest of offsetting said glowing reviews, the Das Sporking sporking covers pretty much anything I could say. In short: the prose isn't horrible, but it's mediocre and clichéd, and the plot is Mary Sue-ish and frequently disregards canon for no good reason. (I guess the reviewers are used to really, really awful stuff and have low standards.)
| Meishuu chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
After reading a sporking of this... story, I decided to read the original, just to see this trainwreck for myself. It is as terrible as it seemed on the community. Part of me wonders if this story is dead because you realised it was simply terrible and you have grown up as a writer during these years, the other part of me wonders what some of your reviewers are smoking by proclaiming this is an "amazing" story with "well written" characters. I guess they're Slytherin apologists too because that's the only way I can see them ignoring this story obvious flaws.
| Lunaliceazreal chapter 54 . 12/17/2015
I wish you continued this amazing story (:
| Lunaliceazreal chapter 19 . 12/15/2015
I really can't see tom as a good person at all he is a sociopath and sociopaths are usually the way they are from birth. But it's yours story and not canon so I'm curious about how you'll pull this of. I really love the relationship with Blaise and holly Blaise reminds me of my bestfriend. Also I love the way that you wrote the betrayal it seemed really realistic(:
| Lunaliceazreal chapter 12 . 12/15/2015
That's nice of them she deserves a party(:
| Lunaliceazreal chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
Your descriptive language is veri good!
| Lunaliceazreal chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
| ayanamifaerudo chapter 54 . 11/21/2015
INSTANT FAVORITE! INSTANT FOLLOW! IN MY TOP FIVE FAVE FANFICTION.
I know it's been years and it says it's a dead story, but is there any chance you'd continue this? Pretty, pretty PLEASE.
| Rainy-Round chapter 54 . 8/4/2015
Looking forward to more. Hope Ur hiatus ends soon and u find inspiration
| Moonysilverwolf chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
I'm only on the second chapter and I love it soooo it continues as it is now I found my new favorite putting in my favorites cause I'd be crazy not to.️
| Guest chapter 54 . 5/11/2015
So wish that you would update. *Insert sad puppy face*