|Reviews for Child of Grace|
| Cherryx3Cat chapter 54 . 4/29/2013
aww im upset that you abandoned this story:( this was DEFINITELY one of my favorites by farr! i read the whole thin g in just 2 days:) maybee you'll think about finishing it up? hopefully, pleasee! anyway, thank youu for the great read. i really appreciate it.
| KhaalidaNyx chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Okay, I take it back. To HAVE to update this story! It's too amazing to NOT continue!
| KhaalidaNyx chapter 54 . 4/24/2013
That is the worst possible place to end this story. IT IS SO EFFIN AMAZING! I don't care if you don't post again, but I'm putting this on my Favs and watching for another one, anyway.
| purple sky always chapter 54 . 4/20/2013
Hmm, I really hope that Sirius doesn't die in the department of mysteries.
| Guest chapter 54 . 4/10/2013
Oh please please please continue!
| InsanityUnleashed chapter 54 . 4/9/2013
Just kinda wondering, has this story been abandoned, or have you just left it for a long while, hoping to have some inspiration? I mean, I love this really, and it would be a shame to just let the plot hang. The characters are really developed and believable, not to mention accurate! Thank goodness, I dislike reading stories where everything is simple and easy and straightforward.
The whole thing is a really good take on Female!Harry, and Holly is both interesting and new. I mean, the basic story is the same, but the details are different enough that it's not like reading the books all over again.
So I really just want to thank you, despite any abandoning you may of may not have done, because regardless of that, the stuff you've written and posted is genius and I've never enjoyed a Slytherin's point of view more.
| Gracfully chapter 14 . 3/10/2013
neat & so very great the same time
| Gracfully chapter 10 . 3/10/2013
so very great :)
| Gracfully chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
neat it is
| Gracfully chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
| Guest chapter 54 . 3/2/2013
| Guest chapter 53 . 3/2/2013
you should keep writing this
| PyroET chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
The plot so far seems to be well structured, and, blessedly, you actually apply general English grammar to writing. Though, you probably have thrown in too many characters, which make it difficult to develop all of the relationships. Also the names you've chosen for your OCs are... interesting... Machiavelli was a terrific choice for the Bloody Baron's identity, even if the person I'm thinking of I Niccolo Machiavelli.
| Catachresism chapter 27 . 2/14/2013
First, I'm sorry that this is more of an anecdote than a review, but it is what it is...
"[Trelawney]... mentioned that she would catch the flu in February". I think this is pulled from the original books. If so, that makes this even more of an example of how if predictions are vague enough and go far enough afield, they're bound to come true - more because of the laws of probability than anything else. What I'm actually trying to say, though, is that I'm reading this in February - and I've been out sick with the flu for going on a week now. Go figure, right? Broken clocks are right twice a day and all that...
That aside, I love your take on the series and the characters. This piece has a very different voice than your drabbles - which isn't a bad thing, because I think it comes from the amount of dialogue and forward motion in this story, but it's interesting. It's really beautiful, though - as always, you've captured an amazing depth in your characters.
| Olufemi Whitlock Hale chapter 54 . 2/8/2013
This story is really good and I hope u will somehow continue it till the end since u already have so much done! Pls pls pls pls pls update it!