|Reviews for Child of Grace|
| Luna Moonlight Fawn chapter 11 . 9/14/2005
What great chapter and ending:D You did great on this one and it was so cleverly thought out:D I can't wait for the upcoming year two when Holly returns:) Update as soon as you possibly can and keep up the great work:)
May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)
Bye for now:)
| NephyRiddle chapter 11 . 9/13/2005
Awesome chapter! I love the founders curse! It was very well put together, me is thinking. Update soon!
| High Serpent King chapter 11 . 9/13/2005
Ooh, great. The second year is coming up. I can't wait to see how your changes will effect the outcome with the diary and Lucius Malfoy with Holly being friends with Draco. I think it's good to put it with the same story as just how you're lazy to make a new one, I'm lazy to click to a new one, Ha Ha.
| High Serpent King chapter 10 . 9/8/2005
Hmm...Draco didn't tell huh? I wonder how that'll affect the housepoints since none were taken away. Also, I like how you got us thinking of Holly's new strange abilities. I don't fully understand them but I can tell they would be usefull in the future.
| Luna Moonlight Fawn chapter 10 . 9/6/2005
Keep up the great work:) I've just reread the whole story and found out that there were things I'd missed out on or just plainly forgotten, but now at least I'm up to date:) I can't wait to read the rest of the story so update as soon as you can:) It's also cool that Draco didn't tell on them:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing the rest of the story:)
Bye for now:)
| Naga's Shadow chapter 10 . 9/2/2005
Very nice please countinue.
| NephyRiddle chapter 10 . 9/2/2005
Great update! Gah...A little too tired to respond properly...
| Iceman chapter 6 . 9/2/2005
I noticed that you ripped a character out of the novel X-Wing: Rogue Squadron. Gavin's homeworld in the novel is Tatooine, same as Luke and Biggs.
| E.A.V chapter 2 . 9/1/2005
social norms say not to hit girls or women leaving boys and men to be treated more harshly...I think that that would have been a major factor in the Dursley's treatment of Harry had he been female.
| TeoBlaise chapter 9 . 8/24/2005
ALRIGHTY THEN! I have just a few questions for you if you do not mind? Do you, well sorry if you do ; Well first, is Holly a seer of some type. If so, does it have something to do with being a mid-mage? Is the young man in her dreams in older Blaise? DOes Draco have a crush on Holly as well? Will this be a Holly/Blaise? Will we find out more on Dumbledores secret heart desire? Just some basic questions hope you can answer them but if not i understand. Well later,
| Anonymous chapter 9 . 8/20/2005
Excellent chapter! But I'd like to see more of Holly's mind mage abilities and it would be good to see Draco more often. Please update soon!
| Luna Moonlight Fawn chapter 9 . 8/19/2005
Are Holly going to go to the Forest and detentions there like Harry has in the original series? It seems like Holly have certain psychic abilities apart from some telepathic ability:) Great chapter can't wait for the next update:) I wonder what Blaise saw in the mirror? nd having Holly like professor Flitwick was cool too:) We don't see much of him in the original series, that's why AU's are so much fun:) Anything can happen in them:)
Have a continued great summer, I hope you had fun on your vacation, bye for now:)
| High Serpent King chapter 9 . 8/19/2005
That boy in the dream...it seems like Holly thinking of her connection to him, obviously it's Tom Riddle, and it seems Dumbledore is wishing that he was his friend instead of his enemy. Anyway, it's good you're answering responses on your profile so we could still communicate. Honestly, I don't know why they made that no responding rule for stories, it's insulting and stupid.
| The Wandmaker chapter 9 . 8/18/2005
I am enjoying this story immensely - I love different takes on the orginal...especially when they're fun and satisfying. Your particular attention to detail (the character dynamics of the Slytherins) is well done. But most important, you raise a interesting point: Would a female "Harry" react differently to the events of the books? How would things change with the slightest shift of perspective? You're answering this question beautifully.
| NephyRiddle chapter 9 . 8/16/2005
Hi! This is an interesting story! I've only just...found it, I suppose. I mean, I've seen it before but Girl!Harry seemed is a bit cliche and I never bothered to read it. Just today, when you updated, I realized that I had made the same mistake with other stories of yours and I decided to read it. It is very (make that bold, italic, and underlined) good. I'll not make the mistake again; I've learned that all your stories are brilliant?
Have you ever considered writing a book or something? I mean, fanfiction is pretty much (for me, though not necesarally you) taking JK Rowling's characters (and thier attitudes) and setting (both which you seem to have no problem making up yourself). Though there is also the other stuff; the very basic information (Hogwarts [as a castle plus grounds, moving protraits, and, most importantly, the house system], magic [including Occlumency, Apparation, etc.], and all that sort of stuff).
And back to the chapter: the boy...Tom Riddle? He's the only one I can think of...Or (sudden thought) Dumbledore, though that doesn't seem too likely
A few things:
1)Holly's mind-reading abilities seem to have fallen a little too far in the background (at least to me). Perhaps she has strengthened her walls, not really having any consistent threat to her like at the Dursleys.
2) The number of friends seem to be a bit...excesive. I mean, I suppose being in Slytherin and with the personality you gave her...But in my oppinion she honestly needs a few less friends and some more enemies and some people that are merely aquantinces.
I think that's all for now! Please update soon! (any story that you want)