|Reviews for Torn Away|
| Guardian of knowledge chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
I FOUND IT! I FINALLY FRIGGIN FOUND IT! The picture on DA made me cry, and I searched so hard for the fic bellonging to it! And now I found it! :D
GREAT storry, brought me to tears :'( 3 I love this!
| lastchildofglass chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Noes! Dax can't die! ;~;. I now want to hug Jak and make all the bad things go away. :cries:
| EvenFreaksNeedLove chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
This is one of the most amazing things I've ever read.
| ChernobylKrigare chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Meep. How sad.
| Angevar chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
*makes small pain/sympathy noises*
Mou... sad. Jak shouldn't be sad.
*sniffles* But still good, not nice-good, but good.
| Heiki Storm chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
~sobbing~ ;_; so sad! ~hugs Jak & Daxter~ poor Jak... poor Daxter...
| STARFIRE101 chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
OMG THAT WAS SO SAD. U ARE AN EXALENT WRIGHTER. AND BECAUSE OF YOUR AMAZING WRIGHTING I WILL LET U IN ON ONE OF TEH STORIES HERE. NO MATTER WHAT DO NOT READ A JAK AND DAXTER STORY CALL CROSS FIRE. THEY RUINED THE ENTIRE THING. EW. BUT YOUR STORY IS REALY GOOD.
| DARTH VADER C11 chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
WAH! BOHO! *SNIF SNIF*
I FEEL SO SORRY FOR EVERY CHARACTER IN THIS THING THAT GOT HURT EMOTINALLY, OR PHISICLY...
ESPICIALLY TESS, JAK, DAX, AND EVERYONE ELSE!
*SIGH* I WONDER WHAT WOULD HAPPEN NEXT...
| Unknown22Unknown chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Aww, how sad. Poor Daxter... wait, Poor Jak! Great story, I feel ashamed to say that I cried. I donno why, I just did... Must be pre-pms or something. I donno. Can I say that in a review? PMS? Hmm, whatever. Anyhow, excellent story, loved it!
| von seckendorf chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Good story. Guess that since Daxter's dead,it's pretty much a one shot.
| Era Yachi chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
Uh...gah...well...you killed him! Uh...well, okay, so did I...but...
Wai! No! That was so unbelievably brutal...and sad...so sad...and real. Good job, but...sad...
| 9We're All Mad Here6 chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
OH MY GOD! YOU KILLED DAXTER! YOU SHALL FEEL MY WRATH! BWAHAHAHAHAHA! DIE YES DIE Jemisard! BWAHAHAHAHA!
| Demyrie AGAIN yo chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
Ho-o-oo-oly EFF. 0_0 That was... GOD! That was so effin creepy! AND WONDERFUL! Oh god, it has such a sublimely haunting aspect to it all, something I wanna read over and over... Again, every time I seem to read your work, I see something I truly want to represent in my own, and its freakin' me out! XD I see something so clearly that its like a slap to the face, and you are teh (omg) M4ST3R at representing Jak, no joke. I love how you've made him. He's just so.. I dunno, HUG HIM COS HE'S SAD? No. More like back away slowly, cos this guy's got a load on his shoulders. *shivers* But GOD. This one was THE BESTT! I wanna HIT EVERYONE OVER DA HEAD WITH SPORKS for those who havent read and reviewed! *growls* This is too good of a tidbit to miss, honest! I simply relished Jak's creepily... one-minded POV with Dax. Its like everything in his world revolves around the little guy (SQUE-E-E-EIEI! XD) and that means nothing could possibly happen to him. So... he just keeps talking, and reassuring himself, and the person who's no longer there. Just to make it seem like its alright, and GOD, BEAUTIFUL LANGUAGE. *melts* So, so so good. I just LOVED how, again, singleminded Jak was with everything. Cos thats what he IS, and I love to see it! :3 GAWDGAWDGAWD the last line gave me such shivers that I made a pic around it. :0 Its a bad pic, granted, but a pic all teh same, y0. You inspired me artfully! ... even though I was braindead, but STILL.
Anyways, this was like... the perfect representation of fears for me. I LIKE the cliffhanger, 'dont much understand who's dead though you KNOW Dax is' aspect of it. It makes you wonder if Jak was really alive at all, ne? SO DELIGHTFULLY CREEPY! And jeebus woman, if Im the one who got you into writin' this gold, I certainly have an accomplishment on my hands _ Im so flattered you see me as that good! *BLUSHES* Anyways, Im off to read the next fic I so callously missed my first time round cos I went on a trip X_X Urgh.
AND IT HAS JxD EN EIT! 0_0 *HAPPY* I NEED A FRIGGIN FIX, MAN! *scampers off* omfg so excited!
(And BTW- Im so sorry if you misunderstood my last review X_X When I said 'PRETTY' detailed descript of Dark Jak, I meant beautiful, not 'sorta'. Like, it was PRETTY, and so detailed and.. well, pretty :3 SUCH A PLEASURE TO READ, AS ALWAYS! *random glomp* YES I LUBBS YOU~! *umfumf* :9)
| Soran Marlovic chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
thats... fucking creepy! My god you are fantastic! Its so painfully real! the angst and horror are are a work of art! but one thing Im wondering about is that It says that something has been dead for hours, and that Jaks body is cold but who is dead? Dax or Jak? or both? anyway, this is on my favorite stories now.
| Semdai chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
(Sniffle) so sad. sounds like something I would I would write. (choked sob) I love it! I'm morbid!