Reviews for Heartbeat
AllThatGlistens chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Lovely and brutal.
mylovemiroku chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
That's it? AHH! No :( Maybe you should add on a short piece at the end where his heart races because he is only in a coma and woke up again! It was getting cute and fluffy with them lying in bed together, aw. I really liked it though, I agree that the heart thumping helped with the flow of the story. Slow at first, and then escalated quickly. But c'mon, Miroku knocked out by some lowly demon because he didn't have his staff? What about Wind Tunnel?
zennou-sakusha chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Gah, Miroku! *cry*

Love your writing style. The ending was great (so sad though ;_;)
Miko's Youkai chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
That was really good...amazing...
La Victime chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
omfg. no way. that was so...intense. thanks 4 making me cry. but, sango's never called him miroku, well in the english stuff she does. but i digress. that was the best, sad 1st chappie ever. i can't wait 4 the rest! XD
Silindro chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
That was good for a tragic story.
b7-kerravon chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Woah! Wow! I LOVE the format you used - both effective and original. It added tremendously to the story...
Little Flea chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
WHHY? screams ::D
Newbie GK chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
Interesting. I found the beating of his heart a slightly strange element at first but it helped the piece flow and eventually lead to sad but well-written conclusion. Even though I love my happy endings, I must say you did a great job with this piece.
gygirl chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
This was a really good story, i liked it a lot. But it was sad at the end..Miroku dead...i don't even wanna think about it.
SKgirl chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
ixr chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
WOW that as so sweet! and extremely sad...wish it were longer :D
BlueFairyDust chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
That was one of the best Miroku/Sango stories I've read (even though it was so sad). You write Miroku so well! Great job .
Ikaaro chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Aiee! That gave me the shivers! You just killed off half of my favourote het. pairing! P

It was very well written. I loved it

And I don't see much to critique you on o0 because well you're amazing so ]
MidnightRosebud chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Did he die? I'm confused...I think I should be sad, but I'm a little confuzzled...
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