Reviews for The Beautiful Game
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2020
How does dandruff keep one from flying fast that makes no f****** sense
GraceNatalie chapter 17 . 8/11/2020
Thank you for the bloody brilliant fic! I really enjoyed it all the way through.
I Guess broom jumping runs in the family.
First Lily then Harry.
GraceNatalie chapter 16 . 8/11/2020
The proud Gryffindor in me is cheering and celebrating for that win while the concerned Jily shipper in me is worried for Lily.
So basically, I’m quite conflicted at the moment.
GraceNatalie chapter 15 . 8/11/2020
James literally f-fell asleep. This is priceless
Lily is just casually saying that she fell in love with him while he’s just snoring away. Your imagination is gold!
GraceNatalie chapter 14 . 8/11/2020
Lils’ convo with Ver was literally so adorable
GraceNatalie chapter 13 . 8/11/2020
Okay, so that prank of Skeeter was absolutely fantabulous! I’m pretty sure that Jily aren’t actually together yet but I hope they will soon!
Your writing is really original and I really enjoy it :)
GraceNatalie chapter 12 . 8/11/2020
I was literally crying when James was talking about how he loved Lily. My heart is too soft.
Anyways, Lily snogging Snape is a worse mental image then her snogging Sirius.
I think Sirius has gone crazy with the flashes though
This chapter was really fluffy at some parts and I really enjoyed it!
GraceNatalie chapter 11 . 8/11/2020
I have a feeling that Rita is making Anita photoshop (charm I Guess) Sirius and Lily snogging. Great chapter though!
GraceNatalie chapter 10 . 8/11/2020
I literally love how Lily isn’t embarrassed or anything that potter saw her in the bath. She is just laughing at his reaction. That scene is literally priceless !
It is clear where Harry inherits his seeking skills from now.
GraceNatalie chapter 9 . 8/11/2020
I love Verity’s Spanish. I speak a bit of it myself so I find it rather amusing. Jily fluff literally makes my heart soften. This was really well written and I really enjoyed it
GraceNatalie chapter 8 . 8/11/2020
Amazing chapter as always! Jily’s first kiss is always magical no matter what the situation!
GraceNatalie chapter 7 . 8/11/2020
Another fantastic chappie! More Jily fluff!
GraceNatalie chapter 5 . 8/11/2020
Jily is just too freaking cute! I’ve read so freaking many AU’s and fanfics and by far this is one of the best ones!
GraceNatalie chapter 4 . 8/11/2020
Skeeter is such and arse. You absolutely nailed her writing style though! This idea is so original and I really like it!
GraceNatalie chapter 3 . 8/11/2020
Another great chapter!
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