|Reviews for My Magnolia|
| pistonsfan75 chapter 4 . 7/30/2015
I like the way Ling and Yao stood up for Mulan in this chapter. They really did become like brothers to her.
| pistonsfan75 chapter 6 . 7/27/2015
| LitAddicted chapter 4 . 4/4/2015
This is a good story; although, I'm kinda disappointed Shang didn't get up the courage to confront the real issue. He was lucky, got a way to fight 'honorably'. Oh well.
| anthi35 chapter 6 . 5/9/2014
| Lisa Cooper chapter 6 . 10/14/2012
Thank you for your story. I was wondering how Li Shang and Hua Mulan could get together with all the formalities marriage entailed standing between them. Your solution was interesting. L.
| Kagome Avalon chapter 6 . 6/14/2012
How could Mulan be a widow when she wasn't even married in the first place? I think it was in the last chapter you said that the ceremony was going to take place the morning after she arrived? I wander how the Emperor will react when he learns that it was Chi Fu and that King who was trying to start a war. What was Chi Fu going to get as a reward for delivering Mulan to her death? I hope that the Emperor allows Mulan and Shang to marry as it would make everyone happy in the end. Maybe when you fix this story up you could possibly add an Epilogue tying up a few unanswered questions?
| 4leafclover0120 chapter 6 . 3/1/2012
This was good! I was so disturbed by the earlier chapters that I hastily skimmed through till the end. Now I will have to go back and actually read it.
| great gospel chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
This is a really interesting story so far. The descriptions are lovely, and characters remain true to their nature. Though, I am a bit peeved at the emperor, as it seems a bit off for him. Then again, there'd be no point to the story, now would there?
| thecoldest raindrops are tears chapter 6 . 9/21/2009
I missed this...
I was adding all my favorite stories since I just got an account and I MISSED THIS!
:/ This is one of my favorites. I'm glad I found it and read it again.
| LunaSphere chapter 4 . 11/3/2007
hm, this fic is not putting shang in a stellar light...i'd be surprised if mulan still wants him! so all his noble self-sacrificing words, and he didn't know *anything* about liu while telling her she would be lucky and everything would be ok?
| LunaSphere chapter 3 . 11/3/2007
Can’t help feeling Shang is an ass here—for all his fine words, it’s really Mulan who has to pay the price even if he too will be unrequited in love as a result. And how can he be so complacent that the king of liu will treat Mulan well when he doesn’t know anything about the man? Gah, his machoness is pissing me off…the whole "I was sent to protect you not take advantage." nonsense! How is it taking advantage when she as a rational and wiling adult *offers*?
| LunaSphere chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
genuinely enjoyed so far. i love how you're dealing with serious matters in this. lines like the following are really simply wonderful in their insight and emotion:
“ Men, she seethed angrily. If only one of them did have the guts to speak their mind none of these things would happen. She had stood up for her father, and Chi Fu had silenced her, her father had yelled at her. Well she had stood up for herself the moment of her discovery, and Li Shang had relented. A man would have accepted execution as a matter of pride. She was tired of men and their pride and their resignation.”
| Lady Serena chapter 6 . 5/13/2006
oh...how sweet! i really enjoied this story! I really enjoy your work in generall! keep it up!
| Stine chapter 6 . 12/27/2005
Two WOMEN kissing? ! Am i missing something?
| Dagon ng Likha chapter 6 . 1/5/2005
I loved it. It's far better than the official sequel (SHUDDER). Your characterization of Mulan, while not canon, gives a softer, more contemplative side of her. Nicely done!