Reviews for Kiss Revised
shadowrallen chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
If you want a long kiss, make sure the other person can breathe.
Omgoth chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I know you say that this is a prequel, but is it also a sequel to one of your other stories? I want to know the order in which I should read them.
BishiHarem chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Nice take on it! I like it.
Forever Rahhel chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
I don't know if I reviewed for the original, but this is great

and a nice prolouge to your story.
Facelemon chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Much better...
Complete! Hurra!

Oh, great story. You really 'nailed' it this time.


simply -v chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
yeah it was good.
abcdefghijf chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
rell good keep up the good work
4 awesome and not 4 good chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
That was a great new angle at the kiss-scene.
cortisoll chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
very nice.
Incognito girl chapter 1 . 10/21/2004

That was really good. Over these past years few I've read so many eva fics rienacting "the kiss," but I never thought about it from that angle. I look forward to the main story in 02.

Please keep up the good work._

-Incognito Girl
Kishi chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
Man, oh man. Another good author that I'll never match up to. Great...
dennisud chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
Ya know it's kinda like you get your cousin Ernie who's been homeless and gave him a complete make-over! ya did good here with the "New" version.