|Reviews for Keitaro's Return|
| kyjori chapter 16 . 10/28/2013
NOOOOOOO I MUST READ THIS TO COMPLETION!
Great story so far.
| ChemDrug10 chapter 16 . 2/5/2013
( Im so sad that this story hadnt continue
| kidcrud chapter 15 . 4/8/2009
This is a great story I hope you comeback and finish it this story is great and I really hope to see a ending to it
| Gara-the-American-EroSennin chapter 16 . 2/25/2009
i have been patiently waiting for one of my fav storys to update for two years plz update soon i am begging you if you are not going to continue plz tell me
| George Mathew chapter 16 . 7/6/2008
HEY DUDE this IS A GREAT STORY SO DONT Just Keep on Hold UPDATE it FOR NEXT CHAPTER SO UPDATE
| HarimaHige chapter 16 . 4/14/2008
Awesome fic. Its great. I was never so faszinated with a Fanfic before. Althought you habe a lot of new characters in this fic, i like them all. I think Erynn is a great character. I am very curious in which way this fic will go. Respect to you.
Please Update soon.
| Bloodyredshade chapter 16 . 4/10/2008
| kai-koyuki chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Hey, its pretty good there. "Ein." -snickers knowing your real name.-
Love it.. keep it up. I hope to read more of it soon.
| kidcrud chapter 16 . 2/16/2008
wow so good come back and finish it some day
| Drakus chapter 16 . 9/14/2007
Very good story. Painfully long times between chapters, understandable though. (who am I to talk though? I havn't updated in over 2 years.)
I like the shifting between Keitaro and the residents of Hinata, great way of keeping everything in perspective.
| conlan0414863 chapter 16 . 8/27/2007
keep on typing
| AL chapter 16 . 8/7/2007
Yo man the story rulls and good luck at college
| sangkun chapter 16 . 6/3/2007
the story is fantastic. i hope that next update will be longer cuz ur story is awesome.
| Heliosion chapter 16 . 4/30/2007
I just read the whole thing and it took me nearly three hours but I read it. Im tired and knackered but it was worth it. Damn its a good fic and I hope you do finish it. I really do hope you finish it. Its so refreshing to read a fic on something that hasnt been explored to my knowledge. More please and hurry it up man. I need my fix
| E. 0rchid chapter 16 . 4/8/2007
Awesome fic man! Keep up the great work!
Smell Ya' Later!