Reviews for Heart of Darkness
blassreitter chapter 17 . 11/11
Annoying! Stupid your Naruto version. Still weak and pathetic with a weak will of destroying Konoha! The whole story you start and cry about him destroying Konoha without any second though but the whole story he is still a cry, whining, annoying figure. I only stayed in the hope that he was a rudeles, cold bastard but no! And then you came up with a weak version of him if he split himself in half.

While this story is promising and you hold your word about DRAMA, it is not my thing. As I said before, I stick with you for the destruction but it started to annoy me when he got a second though. So, I wish you good luck in your story!
Guest chapter 20 . 11/11
Yay welcome back!
thor94 chapter 20 . 11/11
hope you don't turn naruto softy and comfy with the bastard.
fairyninja73 chapter 20 . 11/11
ahhh u left the cliffhanger...
ah well thank you for updating :D
keep up the good work
sasuke really have a one track mind...
fairyninja73 chapter 18 . 11/5
please continue this...
jmancometh777 chapter 18 . 6/19
I overall like this story, however it doesnt seem all that dark to me, because everytime naruto is confronted by his friends, he seems to choke up and hesitate to take them out, i can understand him hesitating with hinata, however besides that it seems this naruto is just a boy with a grudge and nothing more. If you want to make naruto dark, give him the mindset that pein had or even madara for example. But keep his brotherhood with gaara going.
Benidicts chapter 2 . 4/5
Hey Rongis fuck You I doubt you could write anything better. In fact you haven't written a single story so go fuck your self and keep your stupid ass opinions to your self.

and for the record it is a good story so far just a couple of plot holes here and there.
the grim reaper chapter 18 . 4/1
i like this story
Guest chapter 17 . 3/6
Naruto should have slapped Sakura for that stunt
Gothic Rain chapter 10 . 8/26/2014
Naruto is really messing up
Gothic Rain chapter 2 . 8/26/2014
Yeah ya better be
Rongis chapter 18 . 5/27/2014
Fuck your idiotic story i bet even you don't know what you are writing right ?
Guest chapter 18 . 1/3/2014
Update! PLEASE!
kjjrghwIU chapter 18 . 12/13/2013
kinda upset you made all the couples hetero *shakes head disaprovingly*
Laughing Shadows6 chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
great story:)):)!
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