Reviews for The One
jania-chan chapter 2 . 4/2
Guest chapter 6 . 12/5/2015
It's funny how in this story Stan is more than willing to be Kyle's protector, whereas in "The Unthinkable", one of the reasons Mike breaks up with Kenny is because he doesn't want to assume the role of protector if Kenny isn't also willing to help and stand up for himself. Kyle certainly isn't willing to help himself in this story and he's actually a lot more embarrassing than Kenny in those other three stories. Why is Stan putting up with Kyle's pathetic behaviour in this story? Kyle disgusts me here. He's the true wimp. He's not even trying one bit to make himself better. Hell, he's not even faking confidence to get back at someone. WTF?

BTW, Mrs. Author, I don't know if you're aware of this or not, but not every short person is weak and pathetic like Kyle or Kenny, regardless of gender. I have a friend who's fat, taller AND bigger than me, but I'M stronger and can kick his ass like I have before (long story, long time ago). He can't even bench press 45 lbs without struggling; I can lift that easily as a warm-up and remember, I'm smaller than him. I have pretty much been able to defend myself against larger guys and inflict devastating blows against them that most of them started giving me respect. What about Bruce Lee? He was very small, but he was rock hard, had virtually zero fat, and was one of the strongest people alive. He ass-rammed bigger and taller guys, and he was short and small as. I've seen fight videos in which smaller guys beat bigger guys. Size matters not, remember that. It might be helpful, but it isn't everything, trust me.

It's just that in most of your stories smaller and shorter guys or girls generally are victims who can't really defend themselves unless pushed. What the fuck is that all about? Please tell me that when u update Teenage Girl.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
It would've been kinky if Stan and Wendy ended up fucking after she committed the horrible murder of Stan's boyfriend, Kyle. He holds her against the wall after she reveals the secret and then they get it on! Lol! Potential porn moment long gone. :D
Guest chapter 8 . 8/4/2014
WENDY IS A BITCH!(In this fanfiction)
Guest chapter 13 . 7/22/2014
It ends like Romeo and Juliet.
ToxcChck3noup chapter 13 . 6/30/2013

I just felt it was necessary and also I loved your story even if its over eight years old :)
Fucitaszole chapter 13 . 6/26/2013
I hate you for writing a sad ending JK but this made me cry thanks for writing this story
angeloflight1111 chapter 13 . 11/28/2012
Omg I have fucking tears in my eyes Stan kills himself over his super bestfriends murder? How sweet and sad. That's just...oh I am crying :,(
ShadowWords21 chapter 13 . 8/12/2012
Before the story: hm...sounds interesting!
During the beginning: kewl...reading on...
In the middle of the story: :-o, :(, and :') I wonder what happens next!
In the end: my screen is wet from all my tears! :'( *sobs* this story is so beautiful and so damn depressing!
SuperWoman0124 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I really like this story.
It's very inventive and detailed.
StyleLovah chapter 13 . 8/17/2011

Y-Your story...

I-it's so...

wtf chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
this was fucked and depressing and you ruined my whole day
chibi-master123 chapter 10 . 7/2/2010
This is so sad yet so beautiful...Your a great writer!
XxChloverxX chapter 13 . 4/4/2010
This is about the 2nd best story I have EVER read I was in tears when Kyles parents split, mainly because thats happening in my house at the moment but thats besides the point, anyway 2nd best story, 2nd most depressing thing I've ever read. I LOVE IT.

Peace out

Rock on

Kyle-Kenny-McCormick chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Great story.. It was so sad at the end though :( I had a feel that after Kyle died, Stan was going to kill himself too. I kew it without even reading it. I had to finish reasding this story in one day, it was just so great. This story was definitely one of my favorites that I have ever read on this site. Keep up the good worrk(:
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