Reviews for The One
Mekabella21 chapter 6 . 4/22
*hand on forehead*

Man sheila is awful here, no locks. Jesus I would hate that. They can't do shit in that house.

I agree with Stan, he should tell her to shove it. God yes! His mother is crazy. I am sorry to say it but she is a loon!

I love the description of their first time together. You can really tell Kyle has not done anything and this is all new to him. Stan sounds super horny. Lol Stan knows damn well he should not be doing that when their is no lock on the door but kids will be kids. I'm afraid to read what Kyle's mom is going to do to him.
Mekabella21 chapter 5 . 4/22
No Wendy no. Calling his mom...oh god.
Mekabella21 chapter 4 . 4/22
Wendy is going to lose her shit!

Sheila is awful in this story. Like Ike is 8th grade. I am sure he would do just fine walking home alone. I'm from an old school generation you can say and I walked home starting at age 6 so for me it is not a big deal for Ike to walk home.

Stan please don't hurt Kyle. You sound confused my man. Sit down and think this over because like I said, he chooses Kyle Wendy is going to lose her shit. This Wendy scares me and I don't know what she is capable of making her even scarier.
Mekabella21 chapter 3 . 4/22
Oh boy this is going to get ugly I just know it.

Man I thought the Wendy I wrote was bad. She is nothing compared to this Wendy. I want to scalp this bitch. She is so insecure. You have been dating Stan for years. You should know when he is straying or not.

I am trying to figure out if he is straying or is he in shock that his old best friend is in love with him. When he said I love getting pussy I was like whoa. Very realistic because I do not talk that way but I hear other people do at times. I can't picture Stan being that crass but he is an asshole in this story. This is not a bad thing by the way. Makes me wonder if I should incorporate more realistic wording in my story as this one here has.
Mekabella21 chapter 2 . 4/22
That is so embarrassing oh my god. His mom walking in on him. I feel so bad that happened to him. No kid should have to go through that, jesus.

Kyle is in love with Stan. I can picture Stan in those gym clothes running up and down the court myself XD I can't believe Stan hasn't figured that out. Well Stan can be a little slow at time. I am surprised that Kyle's short self was able to pull him in for a kiss. He was right with everything he said about Stan though. He turned into a total asshole. I said that when reading the first chapter.

Stan seems mean and big in this story. I hope he doesn't hurt or bully Kyle after this. He kept pushing for information. He got his answer and then some.
Mekabella21 chapter 1 . 4/22
This story so far is my speed. Oh god pulling on my heart strings already. Stan oh god he sounds delicious but also like a huge asshole. I wonder how things are going to turn out.

I like that they went their separate ways in high school. I don't read about that too much and it was nice to see that. I am disappointed Cartman became a bully but it's Cartman. I can't expect a lot from him. Kenny is what I thought he would be. I feel bad that Kyle is so small. For guys being short is the worst thing ever.

Oh I almost forgot to mention you captured Sheila perfectly. That is how I manage her to be most of the time.

Okay on to the next chapter.
Shane-bae-Dawson chapter 2 . 4/2/2016
Guest chapter 6 . 12/5/2015
It's funny how in this story Stan is more than willing to be Kyle's protector, whereas in "The Unthinkable", one of the reasons Mike breaks up with Kenny is because he doesn't want to assume the role of protector if Kenny isn't also willing to help and stand up for himself. Kyle certainly isn't willing to help himself in this story and he's actually a lot more embarrassing than Kenny in those other three stories. Why is Stan putting up with Kyle's pathetic behaviour in this story? Kyle disgusts me here. He's the true wimp. He's not even trying one bit to make himself better. Hell, he's not even faking confidence to get back at someone. WTF?

BTW, Mrs. Author, I don't know if you're aware of this or not, but not every short person is weak and pathetic like Kyle or Kenny, regardless of gender. I have a friend who's fat, taller AND bigger than me, but I'M stronger and can kick his ass like I have before (long story, long time ago). He can't even bench press 45 lbs without struggling; I can lift that easily as a warm-up and remember, I'm smaller than him. I have pretty much been able to defend myself against larger guys and inflict devastating blows against them that most of them started giving me respect. What about Bruce Lee? He was very small, but he was rock hard, had virtually zero fat, and was one of the strongest people alive. He ass-rammed bigger and taller guys, and he was short and small as. I've seen fight videos in which smaller guys beat bigger guys. Size matters not, remember that. It might be helpful, but it isn't everything, trust me.

It's just that in most of your stories smaller and shorter guys or girls generally are victims who can't really defend themselves unless pushed. What the fuck is that all about? Please tell me that when u update Teenage Girl.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
It would've been kinky if Stan and Wendy ended up fucking after she committed the horrible murder of Stan's boyfriend, Kyle. He holds her against the wall after she reveals the secret and then they get it on! Lol! Potential porn moment long gone. :D
Guest chapter 8 . 8/4/2014
WENDY IS A BITCH!(In this fanfiction)
Guest chapter 13 . 7/22/2014
It ends like Romeo and Juliet.
ToxcChck3noup chapter 13 . 6/30/2013

I just felt it was necessary and also I loved your story even if its over eight years old :)
Fucitaszole chapter 13 . 6/26/2013
I hate you for writing a sad ending JK but this made me cry thanks for writing this story
angeloflight1111 chapter 13 . 11/28/2012
Omg I have fucking tears in my eyes Stan kills himself over his super bestfriends murder? How sweet and sad. That's just...oh I am crying :,(
ShadowWords21 chapter 13 . 8/12/2012
Before the story: hm...sounds interesting!
During the beginning: kewl...reading on...
In the middle of the story: :-o, :(, and :') I wonder what happens next!
In the end: my screen is wet from all my tears! :'( *sobs* this story is so beautiful and so damn depressing!
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