|Reviews for Of Heroes and Hatred|
| CodeRed 73 chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
Yes,another Optimus Prime fic!*does cartwheels around the room* First off,thank you,thank you,thank you for making your fic READABLE. It's aggravating to read what could be a potentially good fic be ruined by bad grammar,sentence structure,and a meandering plotline.*steps of soapbox*Although,it was a bit on the short side,the story had an easy going flow to ,you even had an "will they or won't they kiss" moment in there;but of course,Elita just left him hanging,THEN turned down his ,that's one cold-hearted woman,lol! "The touch that felt like eternity was a grim reminder of another yet to come." I think that one line pretty much defines Optimus' and Elita's relationship,and also has a bit of foreshadowing to it(hint,hint).I hopr to see more G1 TF fics from you real soon!
| Cabriel chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
Nice open-ended finish. Had me hoping for a while. But then... that's what chapter 2 is all about ;) Anyway, it's a nice fic that left me hanging.