|Reviews for Artificial Paradise|
| xenomorphlover4321 chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
i want more i want more
| Monoko chapter 3 . 9/21/2010
all xenomorphs are male, so i dont really get why you had the suru be male.
dont have children that way, the queen lays eggs that come from her egg sac, to put it in short.
| Don-Jam chapter 4 . 7/28/2010
I have to say that was good, the only thing is that I wish to know what's next.
| Yautja's Pet chapter 4 . 7/24/2010
awwww so kawaii!
will there be a sequal?
| raptor125 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
oh my god that king is gay! thats disturbing! but still nice story i guess _ but still gross and disturbing.
| melissa chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
THAT WAS SO CUTE! MORE CHAPTERS PLZ!
| VulcanFanGirl chapter 4 . 4/4/2009
THAT WAS SO CUTE
| beth.e.belle chapter 4 . 3/7/2009
i liked your story. Also you little comments at the end of all the "chappies" are hilarious!
| kittylovesmurder chapter 4 . 7/7/2008
I love your story I thought it strange at first to find out both were male but I can see why...like in jurassic park all dinosaurs were female..aanyywwaayy..sorry for that I'm just to deep into things..still loved ur story hope to see more.
| Ridley the Violator chapter 2 . 12/1/2006
More VIOLENCE! KILL KILL KILL
| Ridley the Violator chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Sometimes, i pick my nose, and theres blood in my boogers.
Oh right. Um...
| Sephykoi chapter 5 . 8/23/2005
OMG! OMG! Yaoi (male x male) xenomorph story!
That was so freakin' cute! *dies*
Where's the next chapter?
Hehe... oh, and xeno-sex is hot :P *grins & adds to fave's list*
| Veriea Fornnan chapter 5 . 8/19/2005
Interesting idea but why the heck is the suru male? At first I thought it was a typo but it seems to continue...very brain hurting...*wince* A little help?
| Abigfatrat chapter 5 . 8/16/2005
This is great so far, oh and the xeno sex is awesome. :)
| Fyrewurm chapter 5 . 4/30/2005
This story is cute. Diffrent from anything i've read. I really like it.