Reviews for Artificial Paradise
xenomorphlover4321 chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
i want more i want more
Monoko chapter 3 . 9/21/2010
all xenomorphs are male, so i dont really get why you had the suru be male.

dont have children that way, the queen lays eggs that come from her egg sac, to put it in short.
Don-Jam chapter 4 . 7/28/2010
I have to say that was good, the only thing is that I wish to know what's next.
Yautja's Pet chapter 4 . 7/24/2010
awwww so kawaii!

will there be a sequal?
raptor125 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
oh my god that king is gay! thats disturbing! but still nice story i guess _ but still gross and disturbing.
melissa chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
THAT WAS SO CUTE! MORE CHAPTERS PLZ!
VulcanFanGirl chapter 4 . 4/4/2009
THAT WAS SO CUTE
beth.e.belle chapter 4 . 3/7/2009
i liked your story. Also you little comments at the end of all the "chappies" are hilarious!
kittylovesmurder chapter 4 . 7/7/2008
I love your story I thought it strange at first to find out both were male but I can see why...like in jurassic park all dinosaurs were female..aanyywwaayy..sorry for that I'm just to deep into things..still loved ur story hope to see more.
Ridley the Violator chapter 2 . 12/1/2006
More VIOLENCE! KILL KILL KILL
Ridley the Violator chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Sometimes, i pick my nose, and theres blood in my boogers.

What?

Oh right. Um...

Whatever, bye.
Sephykoi chapter 5 . 8/23/2005
OMG! OMG! Yaoi (male x male) xenomorph story!

*fangirl squeal*

That was so freakin' cute! *dies*

Where's the next chapter?

:D

Hehe... oh, and xeno-sex is hot :P *grins & adds to fave's list*
Veriea Fornnan chapter 5 . 8/19/2005
Interesting idea but why the heck is the suru male? At first I thought it was a typo but it seems to continue...very brain hurting...*wince* A little help?
Abigfatrat chapter 5 . 8/16/2005
This is great so far, oh and the xeno sex is awesome. :)
Fyrewurm chapter 5 . 4/30/2005
This story is cute. Diffrent from anything i've read. I really like it.
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