|Reviews for And In The Darkness|
| Kerttu chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Good stuff, real good stuff! The spinning sensation you gave with the rewind-fastforward comments was a very good as a feeling of being out of balance (as Sands must feel after being blinded) and also control. And it is a wicked plot device!
Sure, Sands would recognise El's guns from anywhere... *grin* Good use of quotes as well, the LotR one just hit the nail on the head and drove it in!
| vanillafluffy chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
I liked this (as improbable a couple as I always think these two are).
shinysharpness, godshitting truth-nifty contrapted phrases that say quite a lot...
Only thing that made me think of PotC was Sands navigating...had a flash on Jack pacing out the location of the rum on this island.