|Reviews for The Stag and the Dragon|
| Whoisalice chapter 5 . 3/2
I don't normally read crossovers but this one was in Instant Classics community. Good job I did - honestly, it is so well woven, and so well written. Particular moments: The escapee taxi driver skycar leading to Mr Weasley; the way the canon characters are so in character "Professor Vader"; Dumbledore's answer to Vader about not saying Voldemort's name. Also the fact the force equals magic is explained well. Darth Vader is a natural teacher. Since I don't have a particularly broad knowledge of Star Wars, it's good it doesn't appear to matter... Partly the reason I avoid them unless I know both well enough/enjoy both. I like Star Wars but just don't know much about the world - was a trekkie growing up ha.
The descriptions and features of the story are so great to read and I'm really enjoying it enough to review (and I haven't done that for literal years; possibly 6). Really loving it so far and can't wait to enjoy it up to the last page.
| Srangled Steps chapter 18 . 2/5
I'm sorry but this had such promise and then got so bad
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/26
This fix was pretty good. Was skeptical with throwing the Dursley's into it, but it wasn't bad. How about you make one with Darth revan in it. Through all the books.
| SixPerfections chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
This is pretty cool... Prophecy time.
| SixPerfections chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
Vader as a teacher is quite awesome. As a student I would have loved to have him as a teacher to keep control of the class and make learning easier/more streamlined. Plus it would have looked awesome.
| Ty Rose chapter 21 . 12/20/2013
... I can't fathom how you pulled this off.
I will shamefully admit that as both a SW fan and a HP fan, when I saw the crossover I thought, 'no way, must be a parody. NO ONE could pull that off.' A quick scan of the reviews revealed that you... Somehow... Made it work. Against all of my fanfic-devouring instincts, I began to read.
I can't grasp that you did, in fact, merge these two universes into one plausible, incredibly well written story. The only character who was often OOC was Vader, but you... Somehow... Even made that work. You captured the characters perfectly, so that even when you bring in a character who we haven't seen yet, his identity is obvious before he is even introduced (Han comes to mind).
Thank you for this. Methinks I am still in shock. Well done! :D
| dragoon109 chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
i find it odd that you tweaked vadors personality but find it that snape is evil for no good reason with your statment about what you hated in the 5th book.
isnt it odd that someone can hate another like snape dose? dont you think there is a good reason?
ask your self considering the stuff that happened before the 5th book, all the info about people and culture is it possible that james potter was a bully? yes it is very possible. the culture practically encourages it!
to me what would vador and snape be like? i would think they would act like brothers my self.
| dragoon109 chapter 3 . 12/8/2013
am not sure that is how snape acts likee with vador and i dont think vador would care for potter
| Artemis J. Potter chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
This is a very interesting fanfiction. I do think that you can tie the HP/SW universe together fairly well; they have similarities (ex.: magicthe Force). You write like J.K. Rowling, and you managed to get the characters voices just right. It does feel more like a Harry Potter fanfiction than a Star Wars one, but I still enjoyed it. The funny thing is that I think Darth Vader would have been a better teacher than that evil Dolores Umbridge! :P
| Snorkackle chapter 2 . 10/7/2013
I nearly pissed myself when Malfoy insulted Vader
| BeastRage the Hunter chapter 18 . 9/2/2013
The Twins and Boba Fett...BEST STAR WARS TEAM-UP EVER!
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Hmmm... I don't think I've seen this premise before, but I certainly love it! Also, I enjoy how Dumbledore actually was wary of hiring a Sith, but in weighing up his options chose a "Prof. Vader" over ministry involvement, as opposed to just acting oblivious and/or negligent- of which he is neither. The only bit that confused me was that Star Wars was common muggle pop culture and the Harry Potter series was not. This story is headed out to a great start!
| Garbouw Deark chapter 21 . 5/3/2013
Honestly, this was really good. I normally only accept stories that have a Sith Harry in the HP universe, or a Master o' Death Harry in the SW universe, but this managed to beat my expectations. My only complaint was that it was a bit too lighthearted. People often don't realize how dangerous seemingly innocent spells can be. The cheering charm can break ones mind (I'm assuming that three days ought to do it) and you can blind someone with an overpowered lumos. But aside from that, this was a damned good story.
| StrengthAndHonour chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Uh, hello! Just wondering, Iv'e been reading this for a while (i'm on Chap 14), and am absolutely in love with the ideas, wondering if I could borrow the "Order of the Phoenix joins the Rebel Alliance" idea? I would reference you, if that is good? After a HPxSW, and loving yours sooooo mucho grande!
| GuidingHand chapter 8 . 4/23/2013
That is hysterical! I love that Dumbledore is utilizing the Wesely twins' skills under the guise of "detention".