|Reviews for Watching From Above|
| Fletty chapter 10 . 4/18/2011
Awesome story - I would've loved the action to be included in the story, and not told as just a rehash (Virgil being hurt in the mudslide) but this was a very good, well-written story.
I would recommend a beta tho - just to avoid any spelling errors. I'm not usually one to pick on spelling, however I noticed that every single 'where' and 'were' were always in the wrong place; just to set you straight tho, 'where' pronounced (w-AIR) is usually when you are looking for something; 'were' pronounced (w-ER) is almost a past tense, used around adjectives.. eg.'The Tracey boys were different...'(This ones a bit harder to explain tho, so look it up!) :-)
Also be wary of your 'accept' and 'except' - 'accept' is to approve; say yes to; 'except' is to single out; eg.'Off with their heads - all except this one...'
I'm sure they were just harmless mistakes, but I just wanted to be sure you were aware, so please don't take me the wrong way.
I really thought this was a fantastic story - I could see a good sequel coming our way too! (Please add more John tho! He was a bit left out in this one.) hehe.
Awesome stuff! I'm gonna go see what other T'bird stories you have! :-)
'till next time...
| Marblez chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
i've realised that my review wasn't quite...right. I meant to write more but got distracted so here's another go.
the more chapters the merrier and I say that this storie should (in theory) be excrutiatingly merry...of course if it was then it wouldn't be angst...and I'm rambling.
Let me just say congratulations on such a fab story and is there going to be a sequal when Virgil finds a new girlfriend who doesn't die? i hope so.
| Opal Girl chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Great story. Please write a follow-up. I'd love to hear more about Gordon and Jamie (I sensed there could be a story to tell about them), as well as more about Scott and Virgil. Love their relationship. I'm still hoping Jeff finds out about Virgil and Anna. I wonder what his reaction will be?
| ctymose chapter 10 . 12/18/2004
Bravo! Encore, Encore!
| white rose01 chapter 10 . 12/18/2004
id like to congratulate you on a great story, it was so filled with emotion that it hits the reader and draws them in. id love to see a sequel to this, so i hope you give your reviewers what you want! im just sorry i didnt find it earlier, although i may have been exceedingly upset at having to wait to find out if Virgil had actually died! hoping to read more of your work soon.
| Marblez chapter 10 . 12/18/2004
the more chapters the merrier!
| Chibimax chapter 10 . 12/18/2004
Awesome story ! you did really a good job on it :D please conucate writing these storys ;) and let's hope that i'll see you next time cya
| Jetmcn chapter 10 . 12/18/2004
That was lovely! Tears in my eyes, again!
Would have liked Jeff and Virge to have talked about Anna but i loved the way you ended it. Kinda wish i had that kind of relationship wiv my brother.
And thanks for discussing the major Gordon reaction in this chapter.
Awaiting your next masterpiece.
| mcj chapter 10 . 12/17/2004
You know this was a very nice story. Very in depth and thoughtful. My congratulations on how you portrayed the multitude of emotions which must have been flowing throughout. I hope you write more soon.
| Leap of fate chapter 10 . 12/17/2004
Absolutely beautiful, so well written and touching and just aw! This is just begging for a sequel and I truly hope you'll give in to your adoring public and provide one! Well done, brilliant work, you should be very proud of this!
| killhill2003 chapter 10 . 12/17/2004
i see a sequal. Virgil fonally telling jeff about his past love. Great story looking forwsard to other works
| sarah chapter 10 . 12/17/2004
| ellesxjadore chapter 10 . 12/17/2004
An FAB way to round up the story! I nearly had tears in my eyes for the third time today! Can we expect a sequel any time soon? *hint hint* It'd be nice to see how Virgil recovers from the shock of it all. Anywayz, thanks for giving me such a great story to read! Toodles!
| Little-Thief chapter 9 . 12/13/2004
Aw this story is fantastic! I was so upset when Virgil died i couldnt even bring myself to review.
This is fantastic. Keep it up. i can't wait til the next chapter.
| Josie chapter 9 . 12/11/2004
YES HE IS AWAKE. I REALLY HOPE COMES THOUGH THIS. PLOEASE MAKE SURE HE DOES I AM A REALLY BIG VIRGIL TRACY FAN HERE YOU HAVE TO KEEP HIM ALIVE FOR ME AND ALL OF US READING THIS