Reviews for Dead Reckoning
drcalvin chapter 11 . 1/19/2011
Wow, great story! It's rare to find a fanfic with such a tight and interesting plot. Looking forward to more )
NamarieGreenleaf chapter 11 . 6/30/2007 really really need to continue this! leaving it there is pure torture! that's abuse on my poor little mind imagination...thingy _ *cries*
NovoCained chapter 11 . 11/3/2006
Sweet story.

Huh. The cliff...a seaside cliff? That kinda reminds me of something...but whatever.

Your writing is awesome for an angsty mood. Ha.

GypsyWillow chapter 11 . 10/7/2006
I only discovered YnM recently and you had just updated so this was one of the first stories that I came across. If they're all this good I'm glad I found this fandom, I'm also glad that I didn't have to wait through that break you took it would have driven me crazy. Already I want to know what happens next, especially what is going on with Tatsumi, he's possessed and yet at the same time he seems aware of what's happening and making no effort to stop it. One other thing I was wondering was Suzaku's reaction, is it that she knows or feels what Tsuzuki feels or is it simply because she knows Tatsumi is supposed to be on there side. I think this review is long enough I'll just go back to patiently waiting for an update!
dodger-chan chapter 11 . 10/3/2006
Wow, neglect ffn for a bit and you come up with two new stories., really. I really like how Tatsumi is both himself and not himself in this chapter. The man really knows how to manipulate Tsuzuki. I love the way you have him play on Tsuzuki's weaknesses. Don't disappear again; finish this.
genkilyn chapter 11 . 9/28/2006
well,veamos, me kede pensando despues q me llamaste...por que carajo t tengo q dejar review si vos nunca me dejas una con mis dibujos,EH? pero para demostrar q no soy como vos,te voy a escribir un comentario,pero a cambio vas a tener q dejar un review en cada uno de mis dibujos,o no te escribo mas ,JA!

bueno,creo q estos 2 ultimos capitulos estan muy buenos,finalmente llegamos al climax de la historia,en donde todo se define,se explica y se tendria q entender (realmente no puedo creer q esa lectora tuya no entienda lo q pasa...quiza tendrias q dibujarle un cuadrito con stick figures? en realidad es una buena idea,podrias hacerlo,seria gracioso :p),o sea ,entre los 2 cap lo decis con todas las letras :TATSUMI ESTA P-O-S-E-I-D-O,q carajo hay q entender?en fin...

una cosa q me jode ,y q no lo haces solo vos,es tratar de buscar maneras de no repetir los nombres,y suplantarlos por descripciones de los personajes,como 'purple eyed man', q en la escuela nos enseñaron q no se debe repetir,pero no hay q abusar ,cada vez q leo una de esas frases para suplantar,no se ,me parece tan boludo q es como q me corta el clima (repito ,no me refiero solo a vos,hablo en gral...pero te toco a vos pagar el pato,sory).creo q tendrias q repetir mas los nombres,thats all.

me parece un poco egoista de tatsumi poner en tsuzuki la responsabilidad de matarlo(tuve q leer esa parte dos veces para entender q esa era su intencion,yo tambien soy lenta -;),entinedo por que y todo eso,aunq creo q hay mucha ambigüedad en eso,por q si uno pone la decision de matar en el otro,siempre cabe la posibilidad (por lo gral) q el otro no kiera hacerlo (obvio,kien kiere cargar con eso?),entonces en el fondo es como q uno realmente no kiere matarse, sino q inconcientemente quiza quiere q el otro lo haga desistir,le implore q no la haga,en definitiva,es una manera inconciente de pedir nos detengan de matarnos,o de pedir ayuda,por q si estamos totalmente decididos a matarnos,lo hariamos cuando no halla nadie para entiende esto?pero bueno,kisa no se aplica a este caso,aunq creo q debe haber una manera para q tatsumi se mate sin la ayuda de tsuzuki,podria comandar a sus sombras para q lo descuartize,por ejemplo,por que no?tatsumi le dice a hisoka en el vol 8 q hay un limite a la cantidad de daño q un shinigami puede tolerar.

creo q cuando termines con esta historia tendrias q escribir la de kaede y le otro,estaria bueno.

bueno,es todo.
Th30v3r0553510n chapter 11 . 9/26/2006
Oh noes!

Tatsumi has gone bonkers! _

Cliffhanger! Bad! I want to know what happens next! ;_;
mirai aria chapter 11 . 9/24/2006
*squees* I only discovered this fic a few days ago but squee! I'm a bit confused but.. I'll re-read again T_T Much love for Tatsumi! I can't wait to see what happens.. :-)
lissy chapter 11 . 9/24/2006
UpdateUpdateUpdate! YAY!
firedraygon chapter 10 . 8/26/2006
*grins* I love how Watari addresses the problem so casually. He's so...refreshing. XP Lovely chapter.
NicotineGum chapter 10 . 8/25/2006
so gripping, the plot and i read it all at one go.

the chapters just keep getting better, and it seems like your writing style seems to be improving with every update.

good work!
Th3O3vrObs3ssion chapter 10 . 8/25/2006

Keep em a comin'! I like your story! *Cheers Konnie-chan on*
dodgerchan chapter 10 . 8/22/2006
Yeah, I'd sign in, but I'm not sure I can anymore. I only go to this site when I get your author alerts.

Excelent chapter. It's starting to come together. That does say that you're finishing it up (sadly). I'll sit at the edge of my seat awaiting the rest.

Sasskitten chapter 10 . 8/20/2006
wow this is actually pretty good. I love it. I just started a YnM story. I am a bit nervous but I hope to be able to make it as good as this.
artee chapter 10 . 8/20/2006
Hey you finally updated I'm glad. can't wait to see how things will turn up.
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