Reviews for Unfinished Business
BrokenSkye chapter 3 . 11/1/2004

Well, keep writing!
FoxyWombat chapter 3 . 11/1/2004
Excellent chapter and the perfect Halloween update!
Generallair chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Now this really getting good. I'm ready for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
serendipity112233 chapter 3 . 10/31/2004
ep! dont end it there!
Abigaile chapter 2 . 10/28/2004
GREAT. Thats such a suspence update again son PLZZ
Jackia chapter 2 . 10/28/2004
OH Interesting!
Navy Babe chapter 2 . 10/28/2004
YAY! Another chappie! I love this story so much, and the Halloween theme is great! I almost don't want the girls to be able to see them, because then that could mean that Harm would be able to rest, and leave Mac alone with Simon. (Although I doubt that he'd ever leave his Mac!) I loved the part where Harm compared the last ten years to being married! *grins happily* Please update soon!
FoxyWombat chapter 2 . 10/28/2004
This is kind of weird, but I like it...I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
judicium sierra chapter 2 . 10/27/2004
I loved this chapter. Hearing a bit of background about what has happened between Harm and Mac for the past ten years was really interesting and brought the story together nicely. Bringing Simon into the story *really* makes it creepy! It always makes me shiver whenever you mention him. Awesome! And the plot thickens! Now more are joining them in the house. Oh yeah, this rocks ;) Keep up the great work, this story is a total breath of fresh air!
serendipity112233 chapter 2 . 10/27/2004
omg! that is so exciting! Maybe Harm can do something to make Jen and Mattie know they are there! (and the kiss was so cute!)
BrokenSkye chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
Er... well it is certainly unusual...

Ok, so I don't really like the character deaths and what happened to Clay and the deaths and the pain the Jag staff would have suffered... and their deaths... and their deaths again...

Well, the fic plot wouldn't have been able to work if not... ah well.

Keep writing,

marineJAG chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I really think you should keep going with this. I'd like to see how they are finally able to be at rest and what has to happen for them to get that. I'd also like to see if Simon ever does make it inside the house and see what happens with them. I think this is rather interesting and I can't wait for you to post another chapter! Keep up the good work!
r chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
yeah this is cool
serendipity112233 chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
omg! no offense but at first this sounded really stupid, and i didnt exactly want to read it. I should know better, however, because you always have the best original stories ever! lol, amazing! this story is great! But, being a ghost couldn't be too horribly awful if they can feel each other.. they could invest in other 'extraciricular activities' if you know what i mean!
C. Murrow chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
This is an excellent start! I can't wait to read some more.

This is awesome, e-dog! :)

Hehe. VERY creative, if I do say so, myself...
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