Reviews for Legacy of the Lunar Spear
TheDarkChronist chapter 33 . 5/8
-"Yelling, destruction, sex in my damned kitchen."

"The kitchen? That's unsanitary!"

"He told you about that?" Ling asked.

"I walked in on you two." Cao Cao shook his head. "I just wanted some damned tea."-

Mother of god, laughed so hard with that...

Well, back to things. Ignore my last review regarsing the numbers of Guan Du, didn't know you would be revealing that later. I really liked your fic so far, and it saddens me that it's probably dead. But yet, this chapter could make a nice ending to it. After all, this was Ling's and Dun's story, and it has been fulfilled. They have a daughter, they are happy and at peace. We already know what happened with Cao and Wei from history, and I don't think your story would deviate much from it later on. So sad as it can be for it to be left like this, it feels good to see the main characters happy by its end. Will keep the story on my tracked list tho, in case for some miracle you decide to keep writing it. Take care
TheDarkChronist chapter 18 . 5/6
Huh... Yuan Shao had a bigger army than Cao Cao, tho. A lot bigger. Literally ten times Cao Cao's numbers. That's why his victory (Cao Cao's) at Guan Du is seen as an unparalaled tactical feat in military history. Other than that, nice chapter
TheDarkChronist chapter 3 . 5/4
Well written, and so far interesting. Just a cuple things about this chapter. Xia Pi was in Liu Bei's hands before Lu Bu took it (from the inside after being taken as a refugee by Bei to that matter) and was Liu the one who went to Cao Cao for help, not the other way around. Also, Guo Jia was on his late 20s around this moment, and he wouldn't die of his illnes until almost a decade later, on the 207 when he was 37. It's a bit odd to have him as a dying old whimp this early. Other than that, good fic. Will keep reading
Lillithknight chapter 6 . 12/23/2016
Where is art of war?
July30 chapter 33 . 6/28/2015
that was a great story I look forward to seeing if you make a sequel to continue to be at work
Ben Kitsune chapter 33 . 5/12/2014
I have to admit, I've been reading this story since it was first published, and I recently came back to take another read through it. It's like walking through old, fond memories, in a sense.

While I'm sad to see that this fic hasn't been updated in over three years, I can't help but be amused since Lu Lingqi is actually now a playable character thanks to Dynasty Warriors 8: Xtreme Legends.

Maybe, hopefully we'll see an eventual resurgence of this story? It's simply too good to let die.
Si Xiang chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
I hope you continue this, I've had a wonderful time reading this.
OnnaMusha chapter 29 . 12/30/2013
I'm rereading this fic for the second time and it's still the best DW fanfic ever!

Xiahou Dun is a sexy beast ;)
Kuro Neko to Kuro Bara chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
okay, so i'm re-reading this story, because its amazing like that, so i only have one question that i havent firgured out yet. Where the hell is art of war?! sorry, its just, i've been trying to find it to read your deleted scenes, but i evades me every time. please help me out here
thewonderingman chapter 33 . 5/17/2013
this is an incredible story and i look forward to the next chapter.
aeva elementia chapter 33 . 7/7/2012
The last chapter was at the start of last year. Please, don't be cruel and leave this incomplete. This is the best fic on the site for DW Romance, and you still manage to be true to the actual history. Your characterization leaves me smirking after each conversation, and the in-game references KILL me :D ! I don't think I'll survive the sight of another "what will happen if OC's dark past is revealed to so-&-so bishonen" fic by some greenhorn writer. I plead, find it in your heart to go on.
Marianela24 chapter 33 . 8/1/2011
I did not think that I would like you fanfic as much as I did, but I just could not stop reading it. I hope you will keep writing it.
XiahouDun1225 chapter 33 . 7/18/2011
Dude I really hope you decide on making chapter 14 O3O
Huredhiel chapter 33 . 6/27/2011
OMGGGG i love it xD I hope you update soon, much love to this story and you :D
Rio 2.0 chapter 33 . 6/20/2011
I wanted to start this review off by bitchin about the OOC-ness and what not, but then I read more and I got addicted.

Plus, I looked more into it and I was wrong to begin with. You may not have been aware of it, but I felt it necessary to admit my wrongness haha.

On a lighter, slightly ironic (?) note - your characterizations are my favourite part. EVERYONE is loveable to a degree, and that perfectly exemplifies how you have managed to create three dimensional characters that people can find a way to relate to on an unspecified level. There's been a few cases of slight anachronisms - especially early on - but I mean, one of the latest weapons making their d├ębut in DW7 is a freaking arm cannon so anything goes at this point.

I don't even know what I'm rambling about anymore. I love it, and I hope to see this to the end!
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