Reviews for Beyond the Wire
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
interesting and sad
Astra chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
WOW! I missed this update. Amazing writing. Glad you dediced to post it.
Designation chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
*ahem* Feedback:

Loved it! Point schmoint. It had just the kind of (pardon repetition) point that I appreciate. It's a turning... spot, in Ben's life - the ... spot at which he realizes that things can never be the same again.

It did not need the Blue Lady to make it Ben - simply the mentionning of wanting to go back, or having difficulty accepting that he was truly gone from Manticore ("This was no exercise." Loved that line.) was a perfect Ben characterization without going overboard. Personally, despite his central fixation on her, I think that not all Ben fics have to be about the Blue Lady.

I'm glad they now aren't.

Absolutely great stuff, Sorrow - keep up the good work!

(Note... Disposable Lives or not, I think it fit with that.)

- Kel
Androgen chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
You gave this fic great atmosphere and detail. GOod job at getting into Ben's head as he ran from Manticore and great start to Ben saga. And yes there will be more won't there? It *can* work as a standalone, but I'd like to see what else you have up your sleeve, otherwise you'd just be teasing. ;)
tabitha5 chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
great, truly great I really liked this it was very believeable...
natasqi chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
I don't think it's unfinished at all.

it gives a raw ready look at Ben's thought at that time. i don't think you should be so hard on yourself.

i loved it.. well done. :)