I'll say this about that; these chapters really DO need to be much longer. And less notes.
Just sayin'.

He gave the man a knut because of the old stories of paying Charon, the Ferryman of fresh souls to Hades. No payment was a dishonor to the dead.
And I caught that loophole of Dumbledore's, leaving out his last "middle name" of Brian from his oath, thus invalidating it.

Ugh, no offence, but this text desperately calls for reread and correction. It's barely readable with current amount of orthographic errors. Conversations are also too rushed. Discontinued reading.

Didn't Hermione actually invite herself? Incredibly rude. She didn't even apologise to Becky for taking the attack from Dolohov.

Crabbe and Goyle are just 40k orks, I love it

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I think this story has more notes than actual written story.

Hmm..interesting. There was no Brian in Dumbles name. Is this vow binding?

I like having Harry use the movie theatre to ditch his guards and agree that the tube would be perfect if any had been left tailing him.
Enjoying the start of your story.

Absolutely loved this. Was hooked from beginning to end. Very well done! I think the ending was perfectly done.

I bet Percy is a MOPS or getting info for Dumbledore. Either way he definitely hates the minister

Idk if you forgot or if this was deliberate but he didn’t say Brian in his name is that oath even binding?

Thank you for a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading this.

This is, without a doubt the most funny, yet serious, "Lord of Azkaban" style of story, I have read in a while, although I must admit I've only read at most 2 or 3 of this particular kind, if this isn't my first... Honestly, I've read so many Harry Potter fanfiction stories in the last year, some more than once, that I'm not sure if I've read anything outside of the standard "Soul Bond" stories I'm used to, even if I seem to remember the premise of being the "owner of Azkaban" From somewhere...

Good work on the story, although I do almost wish there would have been at least one smutty sex scene or something at the end of the story, because, well, it's so heavily hinted at that you almost just expect it and then, are disappointed when you don't see it. But then again, that could be just me with that feeling I suppose...

I like Becky. I hope Harry gets both his girls in this one. Lady Azkaban & Lady Granger-Potter. She looks like a blonde E. Rossum (from Shameless) in my headcanon. Hermione of course is E. Watson. That's hot af.