Reviews for I Want You
lostladyknight chapter 2 . 3/20/2009
I miss the days of simple YoBling! Great story.
lostladyknight chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
I like all of the dialogue. You don't have to have so much prose if you can write a decent dialogue. Also, I realize this story is old... I still wanted to review.
disot chapter 2 . 3/30/2005
that sucked
Nik chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
May I smack the reviewer who just said it was horrible without offering any suggestions? That was rude.

It did need more polish, especially on the vocabulary. But, it had a plot and I could follow it. Thus, it wasn't horrible.

You may, however, want to think about the plausibility of them all being off. It might work better if Catherine and Warrick just happened to have the same night off.

This is a good early attempt.

P.S. I hope that I don't get that same reviewer after I post my first fan fic.
Christieanne-Anna chapter 2 . 2/17/2005
you might want to cut down on the word'said'.
Fighting-this-War chapter 2 . 2/2/2005
erm...the writing was vague..very vague..and the dialogue is basic, i normally like CW stories but i'm not keen on this, sorry.
MikaelaCheryl chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
This chapter's great! Well done.
drama-freak-csim chapter 2 . 12/20/2004
Aw sweet. I'm as aussie so far behind on the new csi eps and when I read the summary I was like, "what, they almost kissed"

can't wait to see that ep. hope you add to your story
Christieanne-Anna chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
TBC means that you have to write more!
Grissom's Monarch Butterfly chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
continue please
MikaelaCheryl chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
This is interesting! Great that it's gonna be continued - did they nearly kiss in Season 5? Cos it hasn't been shown over here yet, lol.
somebody or other chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
This is HORRIBLE writing