Reviews for Everything I've ever done
kittyperry chapter 20 . 6/12/2012
I loved re-reading this story. You're version of Severus and Hermione here was lovely. I enjoyed seeing Minerva find love too. Bravo.
tryingtobestine chapter 20 . 4/20/2012
I really like this story, even though I kind of had forgotten that I already had read it before and only remembered towards the end. It's a good story, so just keep writing :)
Melissa72 chapter 20 . 3/4/2012
Loved this fic...thank you for writing it. My fav moments were:

1- when she grabbed his hand at breakfast and he continued to hold it

2- when Minerva gave her version of he "fell" for Hermione and that he was "besotted"

3- the children discussion...priceless

I was kinda bummed that you took the first kiss and made it out of order in the timeline as well as just noting it passively...but I did like how you set things up in Snape's head about he wanted to make it into an absolutely.

Great fic...who wouldn't be besotted by Snape after reading this?
Pyre13 chapter 20 . 3/3/2012
As in character and believable tale of love between these characters as I've ever seen. I love the slow, and steady rhythm, with the even so hesitant yet now and then daring Snape, the grab for her hand that was illustrated just made me tingle all over!

This is a must read for any fan of the pairing, and many of those who aren't.

Utterly heart warming.

Please write more, we need more writing of this quality and accuracy.


Pyre xxxxxxxxxxx
lili44 chapter 20 . 2/14/2012
Overall this was a lovely and enjoyable story. I found your characters well rounded and believable and enjoyed the addition of the ricky character. I also enjoyed your lack of plot. I think too many people these days feel that all stories need dramatic or extreme plot lines when in reality these can often detract from the story (not in all cases of course). I think that some of the best drama is human drama, the telling of the subtle changes and growth of relationships when explored well can provide a great read and there is no need for additional plots. I felt you understood.

Your slow build up of the relationship at the start of the story was great. My favourite chapters were 12, 13 and 14. The tender moments and vulnerable thoughts were delicious and what I really loved about the story.

After this though I felt the story regressed. You described circumstances and moved through time so quick. I was hoping for more interactions between snape and hermione like those of 12, 13 and 14 and instead found little romance, love or tenderness.

All in all an enjoyable read

thank you for taking the time to write and post this.

kci47 chapter 13 . 2/1/2012
I picked this chapter at random to leave my review. Very interesting story, and definitely a more realistic look at how Snape and Hermione may have come together. I liked a lot of your dialogue between the two of them.
Arysta chapter 20 . 1/24/2012
Lovely, lovely, lovely story! Very in character, very believable in the way that Hermione and Severus make their way from one relationship to the next. Love the bonus chapter where we get to see her parents' reaction (and Ginny's!) Great stuff!
jeon chapter 20 . 1/20/2012
this was lovely. this whole fic was lovely, but the ending & the bonus insert especially so. thank you for posting this and letting us all read it!
kathyjo chapter 9 . 1/8/2012
wow that was a powerful chapter i think we will be seeing some slight changes in our sev coming..i hope to see more of his new friendship as well
Light on the Horizon chapter 20 . 12/30/2011
A really brilliant story. I thought your characterisation was great, and I loved the way their relationship progressed: it was very believable.
Lucy chapter 20 . 11/19/2011
tenoh27 chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
LOL at Hermiones self-righteousness and immaturity.

While she certainly owes Snape lots of grovelling and apologies, I am not sure the same could be said for her and Dracos relationship. That there, was a study case in how prejudices are built in a single day, by both sides.

Thank you.
elizabeth dutson chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I think you really captured the voice of both characters.

Wonderful insight into both characters. It rings true.

This piece is so sensitive, delicate and rich. I would love to read more. Really the best! Thank you!
where she went chapter 20 . 8/12/2011
Another wonderful story.
Dherea chapter 20 . 8/10/2011
Nice story! I think HOW you brought them together is very realistic. I love that they slowly developed a friendship which turned into love. Thank you for including Chap 20. I enjoyed seeing him meet the parents and the pre-wedding story. Good job!
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