Reviews for Can't wait any longer
Angels-heart1 chapter 14 . 4/20/2017
Well that was an abrupt ending! The story was fantastic though. Loved it!
0ayumi0 chapter 14 . 4/7/2015
love ! 3
Eden Evergreen chapter 14 . 10/3/2013
Intriguing solution... hard on poor Vash, yet no worse than what Nightow-san put him through.

Thank you for writing this, and sharing it. :)
Eden Evergreen chapter 12 . 10/3/2013
Hmm, disarmed... intriguing.
Eden Evergreen chapter 11 . 10/3/2013
Riiight... you anticipate that anyone stop reading at a cliff-hanger to review?

*shakes head and pushes the "next" button with a mischievous grin*
Eden Evergreen chapter 10 . 10/3/2013
*whispers softly*

Knives is repugnant. Can't write him without a little of that in there.

*winks conspiratorially*

I think you portrayed Vash's revulsion toward Knives' behavior and goals well... and his determination to protect at -any- cost.
MadameDragonFlower chapter 14 . 5/1/2010
Very nice! I agree that it would be awesome if you were to re-write this. Maybe take it a little bit further?

But not before you finish the Long Slow Goodbye.
Crystal Twilight chapter 14 . 6/10/2009
Good work.
Crystal Twilight chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Good work.
Luv4Uncas chapter 14 . 6/3/2009
really great i loved the ending!
Reficula chapter 4 . 12/15/2008
Aw. That was so cute. :D I couldn't stop reading up until here, so I leave my first review now.

I really like the idea with Meryl's routine reports, because it's so in character, and it serves as a very nice plot device. :D Wonderful.
stretchingthelimits chapter 14 . 7/6/2008
you have plenty of readers! well, i know youve got me. i really enjoy your writing, and ive been reading it for a while, and need to apologize for not reviewing anything until now!
Star Garden chapter 14 . 4/7/2007
AW... That's was awfully sweet of you to write.
Moonbunny chapter 14 . 10/19/2006
wow what a story please please tell me theres a secound part please
AstroLatte chapter 12 . 10/17/2006
Gez...poor Knives!

Not only does he scream like a girl, he's stuck with Crazy-Angry-Vash, his arms don't work, and he's all shot up! Well it's not like he had his arms ripped off by a pic-axe *cough cough*

Look's like Vash isn't the only brother was bad luck.
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