|Reviews for Damnation|
| Loui Loeve chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
o, YOUCH! pretty deep, if i don't say so myself_!
| BetaReject chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
Holy crap are you ever skilled! I love how your tales ponder on views that are not consider common. I never would have thought of Velkan and Marishka being an item but you really pulled this off nicely especially loved the lines:
She was always so cold. But he loved it. It was like holding ice, without melting it...
And he would burn her, scorch her, set her on fire beneath her frigid skin, and then she would cool slowly as she trembled from the white heat of him...
Those lines just blew my mind I love this stuff!