|Reviews for Please Don't Forget|
| Fireruby chapter 5 . 11/20/2004
T_T No! Xellos better not love Miho, great as a character she is...
o_o I cannot BELIEVE how much you made me love this coupling. Not. At. All. I'm blown away.
Oh my, oh my...
Please update soon.
| Fireruby chapter 3 . 11/20/2004
oo Funny. :3 I laughed a lot. And, goodness, I love reading about Xellos. Xellos, Xellos, Xellos... _
:3 What does "3" mean? o_o
| Dark Gotham chapter 5 . 11/13/2004
Great chapter. I really like it.
| Dark Gotham chapter 4 . 11/12/2004
Very nice. I like it.
| Kaeru Soyokaze chapter 3 . 10/30/2004
Wow...someone had fun with this chapter...
| Neo cristal Serenity chapter 2 . 10/29/2004
I like it. Update soon!
| Kaeru Soyokaze chapter 2 . 10/28/2004
It's like Xelloss and Lina, only older...I like!
| Fireruby chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
_ Xellos, Xellos, Xellos, XELLOS!
:3 I'm really excited about this story. I'm a totally devoted Lina/Gourry fanatic, but this should be good. IT. HAS. XELLOS!
_ Eep. Sorry.
o.o Oh, and... You asked us to look for mispellings, so... "She could tell her was blushing"? That's the only one I found. Sounds more like a typo though.
_ Good luck with the story! Keep me updated. :)
| Kaeru Soyokaze chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
o.o That was interesting...
| Kiadi chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
A nice start. I like the fact that you at least start everyone off in they're cannon couples, even if they are not, necessarily, going to end up in them.
The only gramatic mistake I saw was in the paragraph where Amelia was standing outside Zel's door. "She could tell her (she) was blushing." Simple mistake, but I figured you should know.
The characters were only mildly out of character here. I personally can't see Amelia using "hell" in a slang term, but maybe that's just me. _
Overall, though, great job! I'd love to see what's going to happen and who is really going to be paired up with who. And I love OCs too, so I can't wait to see him/her.