Reviews for Staying on Top
waspinator chapter 3 . 6/21/2015
I so wish you had gone into details with this last scene :)

such a funny story.
DarkShell chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
Funny as hell! XD Great job!
dancesontrains chapter 3 . 12/29/2013
Ahaha, this was great!
lisa.demonic.angel chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
babblebuzz chapter 3 . 12/27/2010
Freakin' Hilarious~!
Steven Kodaly chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
Those two do NOT know how to handle their liquor, do they?
JenEvan chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
xD The way everything turn out is such a humorous wonder-from prank to real xD

But it is the little winning phrases and sentences here and there that amplified the 'LOL' effect :D

"You're supposed to laugh at that kind of thing without actually picturing it happening, you know!"


And Megatron actually blasting out the security camera xD

The repetition of the little starting paragraph at the end of it all... "Not again!"

Kibble Beast chapter 3 . 7/27/2009
i cannot stop laughing!

soundwave asking for help. aww.

i loved the argument about who'd be on top...

I'M ON TOP! Now and forever!

of course you will, megsy.

i awed at starscream, when he relents to megatron. "You are. As usual."

poor thing ;P
Amanda Saitou chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Ha-ha... so, the prank was not that far from the real stuff huh? Very nice prankish view on Screamer/Megs relationship!
Mirage Shinkiro chapter 3 . 2/21/2009
LOL! Oh, man. Several funny parts, of course, but somehow the part where Rumble wakes up in a vent and can't figure out why really made me laugh.
Kookaburra chapter 3 . 1/17/2009

This is fantastic. Came here from a link in the TF anonymous kink meme on LJ. Wonderful, just wonderful.

And I loved the bit with Soundwave giving up his cassettes to Megatron like that.
Limmet chapter 3 . 1/12/2009
Haha, that was absolutely hilarious! Loved the interaction between Starscream and Megatron, and their little argument about who should be "on top"...

kouun no ookami chapter 3 . 7/17/2008
Déjà vu - when you've done something you think you've done before, its because God thought it was so funny, he had to rewind it for his friends to see. (snicker)
Umino Akiko chapter 3 . 6/25/2008
oh my they are so cute together!
SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 3 . 5/2/2008
laughs uproariously Oh, that was /good/. XD

Great work on this. lol
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