|Reviews for Intolerance|
| Susan Hillwig chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
If I read any more of your stuff, I may die laughing! I'm a big Bat-fan, and I think you nailed everyone perfectly. My only complaint is please put a space or something in between scene changes - everything ran together when I was reading.
PS - I LOVE JIMMY!
| Corbin Slate chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
LOL! This was so cute! I loved it! :) Jimmy was fun, and Bruce's reactions were great! Keep up the great work.
| Gary chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
People at work were looking at me, wondering why I kept laughing out loud. The "stick up your pooper" was perhaps the funniest 100-words-or-less I've ever read. Sorry I have no constructive criticism, other than you should include a "you'll shoot coffee out your nose" warning.
| Zach chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
The best fanfic I have ever read.
Actually, calling it fanfic is kind of a degrading insult; fanfic, to me, means Badly Written and Squirmingly Awful Characterizations.
Not here! Kudos kudos kudos.
But WHY does Tim need a BATH?
| giveGodtheglory chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Jimmy is ebil.
| RobinofYJ chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
LOL! “I don’t know what that is, but it sounds ebil.