Reviews for Temptation of the Maiden
ok chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
MagicPanda chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
Peter chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
I love the direction the story takes, but there simply isn't enough plot to develop the characters. I feel little to no attachment to the - block, and it seems you expect me to be jarred by her death? No sirree! The plot is simply not fleshed out, and the general effect suffers. Also, there isn't enough pre-exposure to the conductors puzzle, to build up fear and knowledge in the characters. All in all, the story holds some potential, and everything falls flat, ruining the entertainment value of the story as a whole.
NoiiChiino chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
Well then...Very nice.
KZValentine4777 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
what da heck
kt chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
i have no words except that it was just like romeo and juliet ...
M8 chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
You just killed me
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
Tetras fanfic exists?
james chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
wtf...This got depressing FAST! No one was expecting this.
liah rose chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
wtf. blocks dont have sex. humans do. but not... tetris...
Joseph chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
Absolutely thrilling...breathtaking expirience reading this I reccomend to any twelve year olds who want to wank...good job author
IIzzy chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
What the fuck was that
AmazingPickle148 chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
I didn't know it was possible to write a fanfiction about 2 TETRIS blocks fucking but apparently it is. Made my friend almost cry because it was "really emotional and a sad love story" while I'm over here laughing at it because it's so absurd it's humourous. This is why I'm a Slytherin and she's a Hufflepuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
I'm a terrible person, aren't I? I actually laughed way too hard at this. my friend almost cried. this is why I'm a Slytherin.
rosa chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
im in tears
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