Reviews for On the Back o' th' Bus
demon thing chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
aesome hope there's smut in later though.
Scheisskopf chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
You smell like shit because you don't know how to write. Script is not allowed here.

You die and go to hell you badficcer with no reviews. Here. 1st review.

-I'm killing the self esteem of children! Oh happy day!
Lights Dying Fire chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Heh, that was ! Hope that you continue it.

What was it that Goten couldn't tell to Trunks?

Funy!
Oritsu chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
Hm...interesting start! I liked the setting and the dialogue was written very well! I'm curious...just why aren't Trunks and Goten allowed to mess with Turles?