Reviews for Return of the Sayajin
Guest chapter 9 . 4/7
Of this world? You mean, in the universe
guitarlover56784 chapter 11 . 1/16
Okay, android eighteen is NOT as powerful as a super saiyan two, hell not even as powerful as a full power super saiyan one
guitarlover56784 chapter 9 . 1/16
Okay, so I hope you kept in mind the difference power level structures. When kavri goes super saiyan, he is not nearly as strong as when vegito goes super saiyan. I hope you knew that. Some people think just because you go super saiyan, you have exactly the same powerlevel as someone else who goes super saiyan. It all depends on the saiyans base strength, and their super saiyan strength
guitarlover56784 chapter 6 . 1/16
She advanced to stage two of super saiyan already? That's just not possible. It took gohan, one of the most gifted characters on the show, incredible pain and suffering to do that. Kavri is a super saiyan four huh? Then what the hell in the universe is stronger than a super saiyan four? The powers of the dragonballs, could not even create something more powerful, only omega shenron. And what the hell is gohan doing so weak? It's not been so long that he lost the form the supreme kais gave him
guitarlover56784 chapter 4 . 1/16
What the hell, green and red? What the hell colors are those for an aura? At least make it somewhat believable
guitarlover56784 chapter 2 . 1/16
Okay what the hell is going on. Too much, too fast. What, in the universe could hold a threat to vegito? Whose name you spell wrong anyway. There so far have been no transformations and no powerlevels explained. A super saiyan one, so what? goku and vegeta, has ss3 and ss2 respectively and combined, that is enormous. Goku was a prodigy and vegeta was training obsessed. Now that they have ss4, Ill bet they are even stronger than ss4 gogeta. So really, what the hell is going on
Breezy b chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
I really hate Jari. Big tittied Marie Sue.
The story also has no flow. I need a tremendous jump in logic to make the story line plausible. The character interactions are so unrealistic and embarrassingly simplistic.
Foold chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
The Oc was very dumb in my opinion how she was stronger than Buu and learned two super saiykan forms Pass
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
idk if you have ever read dragonball multiverse. But I know this came before that. I like this first chapter to what would happen if vegetto stayed fused, instead of staying and trying to cope, he left, all the way to mid GT (ugh) time
Ermilus chapter 17 . 9/20/2012
I like your story oke. But if that a Goku-Vegeta why does they often talk about Goku and less about the prince of al.. Vegeta.
Infidel94 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
saiyan that is how its spelt not sayan edgit
shadow'relic chapter 24 . 8/27/2010
Great Story! I really enjoyed it, even if my sleep might have suffered as well as my school work. lol (_) I luv it!
L.E.N.E.X chapter 7 . 8/10/2010
But there's nothing lost though. Vegetto is still Vegeta and Kakarrot.

I remember Vegetto being a bit more playful though. Hmpt... Oh whatever... It's interesting I guess...
supersaiyaman chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
very good start to this is rare to find a fanfict of this quality on
sparklesyaoi chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
couls you please send the link to the picture to
90 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »