|Reviews for Return of the Sayajin|
| OMNISENSE95 chapter 13 . 5/28/2016
So... you basically prevented Dragonball GT from happening in this universe?
| Guitarlover56784 chapter 19 . 2/28/2016
Okay, so a fusion of the most powerful saiyans that have ever been born, whose super saiyan one level is probably equal to a singular saiyans ss3 level, and now that he has the fourth level, hes still being beaten. By someone without a transformation. Dude, what the hell. These energies should be shaking the universe.
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/7/2015
Of this world? You mean, in the universe
| guitarlover56784 chapter 11 . 1/16/2015
Okay, android eighteen is NOT as powerful as a super saiyan two, hell not even as powerful as a full power super saiyan one
| guitarlover56784 chapter 9 . 1/16/2015
Okay, so I hope you kept in mind the difference power level structures. When kavri goes super saiyan, he is not nearly as strong as when vegito goes super saiyan. I hope you knew that. Some people think just because you go super saiyan, you have exactly the same powerlevel as someone else who goes super saiyan. It all depends on the saiyans base strength, and their super saiyan strength
| guitarlover56784 chapter 6 . 1/16/2015
She advanced to stage two of super saiyan already? That's just not possible. It took gohan, one of the most gifted characters on the show, incredible pain and suffering to do that. Kavri is a super saiyan four huh? Then what the hell in the universe is stronger than a super saiyan four? The powers of the dragonballs, could not even create something more powerful, only omega shenron. And what the hell is gohan doing so weak? It's not been so long that he lost the form the supreme kais gave him
| guitarlover56784 chapter 4 . 1/16/2015
What the hell, green and red? What the hell colors are those for an aura? At least make it somewhat believable
| guitarlover56784 chapter 2 . 1/16/2015
Okay what the hell is going on. Too much, too fast. What, in the universe could hold a threat to vegito? Whose name you spell wrong anyway. There so far have been no transformations and no powerlevels explained. A super saiyan one, so what? goku and vegeta, has ss3 and ss2 respectively and combined, that is enormous. Goku was a prodigy and vegeta was training obsessed. Now that they have ss4, Ill bet they are even stronger than ss4 gogeta. So really, what the hell is going on
| Breezy b chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
I really hate Jari. Big tittied Marie Sue.
The story also has no flow. I need a tremendous jump in logic to make the story line plausible. The character interactions are so unrealistic and embarrassingly simplistic.
| Foold chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
The Oc was very dumb in my opinion how she was stronger than Buu and learned two super saiykan forms Pass
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
idk if you have ever read dragonball multiverse. But I know this came before that. I like this first chapter to what would happen if vegetto stayed fused, instead of staying and trying to cope, he left, all the way to mid GT (ugh) time
| Ermilus chapter 17 . 9/20/2012
I like your story oke. But if that a Goku-Vegeta why does they often talk about Goku and less about the prince of al.. Vegeta.
| Infidel94 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
saiyan that is how its spelt not sayan edgit
| shadow'relic chapter 24 . 8/27/2010
Great Story! I really enjoyed it, even if my sleep might have suffered as well as my school work. lol (_) I luv it!
| L.E.N.E.X chapter 7 . 8/10/2010
But there's nothing lost though. Vegetto is still Vegeta and Kakarrot.
I remember Vegetto being a bit more playful though. Hmpt... Oh whatever... It's interesting I guess...