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Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
This "chain letter'' is real

so follow

the instructions

and something

good will happen!

LISTEN TO THIS LETTER AND GOOD LUCK!

Sorry,

but this chain letter is for real.

When Anne Wichert got it for the first time,

she ignored it and a week later the love of her

life dumped her for no good reason so

BEWARE,

and just send the stupid letter!

The Lovers of the Heart

In order to form

a more perfect kiss,

enable the mighty hug to promote

to whom we please

but one kiss.

Article 1:

Statement of Love:

The Kiss

1.

Kiss on the hand

I adore you

2.

Kiss on the cheek

I just want to be friends

3.

Kiss on the neck

I want you

4.

Kiss on the lips

I love you

5.

Kiss on the ears

I am just playing

6.

Kiss anywhere else

lets not get carried away

7.

Look in your eyes

kiss me

8.

Playing with your hair

I can't live without you

9.

Hand on your waist

I love you to much to let you go

Article 2:

The Three Steps

1.

Girls:

If any guys gets fresh with you, slap him.

2.

Guys

If any girl slaps you, her intentions are still good.

3.

Guys &Girls

Close your eyes when kissing, it is rude to stare.

Article 3:

The Commandments

1.

Thou shall not squeeze

too hard.

2.

Thou shall not ask for a kiss,

but take one.

3.

Thou shall kiss

at every opportunity.

* Remember *

A peach is a peach

A plum is a plum,

A kiss isn't a kiss

Without some tongue.

So open up your mouth

close your eyes,

and give your tongue

some exercise!

Here are a few reasons

why guys like girls:

1.

They will always smell good

even if its just shampoo

2.

The way their heads always

find the right spot on our shoulder

3.

How cute they look when they sleep

4.

The ease in which they fit into our arms

5.

The way they kiss you and

all of a sudden everything

is right in the world

6.

How cute they are when they eat

7.

The way they take hours

to get dressed

but in the end

it makes it all worth while

8.

Because they are always

warm even when its minus 30 outside

9.

The way they look good

no matter what they wear

10.

The way they fish for compliments

even though you both know that you

think she's the most

beautiful thing on this earth

11.

How cute they are when they argue

12.

The way her hand always finds yours

13.

The way they smile

14.

The way you feel

when you see their name

on the call ID

after you just had a big fight

15.

The way she says

"lets not fight anymore"

even though you know that

an hour later...

16.

The way they kiss when

you do something nice for them

17.

The way they kiss you

when you say

"I love you"

18.

Actually ...

just the way they kiss you...

19.

The way they fall into your arms

when they cry

20.

Then the way they apologize

for crying over something that silly

21.

The way they hit you

and expect it to hurt

22.

Then the way they apologize

when it does hurt.

(even though we don't admit it)!

23.

The way they say

"I miss you"

24.

The way you miss them

25.

The way their tears

make you want to

change the world

so that it

doesn't hurt her anymore...

Yet regardless

if you love them,

hate them,

wish they would die

or

know that you would die

without them ...

it matters not...

Because once in your life,

whatever they were to the world

they become everything to you.

When you look them in the eyes,

traveling to

the depths of their souls

and

you say a million things

without trace of a sound,

you know that your own life

is inevitable consumed

within the rhythmic beatings

of her very heart.

We love them for a million reasons,

No paper would do it justice.

It is a thing not of the mind

but of the heart.

A feeling.

Only felt.

*

This chain started in 1887.

It is a love chain letter.

In an hour you are

supposed to send it to

25 people.

It is easy, just look into

chat rooms and find them.

Anyway,

send it to 25 people in 1 hour.

Now here

comes the fun part.

You then say

the name of the person

you like or love

and then the person will say

"I love you,"

or

"Will you go out with me?"

NO JOKE!

NOW

THE CONSEQUENCES

The consequences are:

If you break the chain letter,

you will have bad luck

in future relationships.

If you don't

break the chain,

then you will be a

happy camper!

CoNgRatULaTioNs!

You have been chosen

to participate

in the

LONGEST

and the

LUCKIEST

chain letter on the Internet!

Once you read,

this letter you must

IMMEDIATELY

(meaning within the hour)

be sent to

25

people

After you send it,

make a wish

and it will come

TRUE

YOU MAY NOT WAIT

FOR A CERTAIN TIME

TO SEND IT... REMEMBER,

IT MUST BE SENT

TO

25

PEOPLE WITHIN 1 HOUR,

OR

YOUR WISH WILL NOT COME

TRUE!

If THIS

CHAIN LETTER

IS CONTINUED UNTIL

THE YEAR 2004, IT WILL BE PLACED IN

THE GUINNESS BOOK OF WORLD RECORDS!

PLEASE CONTINUE IT NOW!

*WARNING*

IF YOU DO NOT PASS THIS ON,

SOMETHING BAD OR WORSE

WILL HAPPEN TO YOU:

NOTE*

THE MORE PEOPLE

YOU SEND THIS TO

THE MORE LUCK YOU WILL

HAVE IN YOUR LOVE LIFE.

IF YOU BREAK

THE CHAIN LETTER

(IT HAS BEEN GOING SINCE 1887)

YOU WILL HAVE

BAD LUCK

WITH YOUR LOVE LIFE

FOR SEVEN YEARS.

THIS IS

NO

JOKE.
smokey21 chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Your story is very good. I can't tell if it is better then the first one, the only real difference was the other guy. You should definitly write a sequel. Looking forward to reading it.