|Reviews for Trapped|
| TheStarshipCat chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
I don't know if I reviewed this already, but I remembered that I read it years ago, and this is really good. I have a strange thing for hurt/comfort and romance stories, and BBRae makes it all the better. Cute but dramatic. I loved it. The one thing I didn't like, though, was when Cyborg said he loved her. Not because it's against my OTP, but it just seemed a little spontaneous and I was expecting him to say a general "all the Titans love her as a friend" thing and not have him know that he loved Raven. Besides that, great story.
Grammar errors (because I'm a jerk):
"I'm sorry" last line early on in Raven's thoughts, there's no period or ellipsis.
And another line, "He lipped his lips". Probably not intentional.
| Elise13 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
| pinkteacups chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
| Evil.VS.Waffles chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I'm blinking back tears right now because of the ending. :) This was really good. I felt so bad for all of the characters. I felt even worse for Cyborg because this was the first BBRae I've read to also have some CyRae in it. Very clever, I must say. Great job!
| BBsevolEAR chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
I LIKE IT SO FAR! :)
IS THAT IT?
IF NOT, PPLLEEAASSEE CONTIUNE!
IF SO...THERE SHOULD BE MORE TO THIS STORY.
| Endless Raindrops chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
That was beautiful! I love it!
| Black Raven 13 chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
I love this story! It's like one of those really good story's that nobody finishes but you,you actully finished it! U Rock Outloud!
Black Raven 13
| reader chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
| titanfan45 chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
That absolutly rocked. Wish it was longer, but it was still great.
| ravengal chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Aw! That was so incredibly adorable! And very much reminds me of a Fairly Odd Parents fic called Undercurrents. Aw, it was the absolute cutest thing I've ever read!
ravengal out x
| BitetheBrokenApple chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
How cute. You did a good job.
| jimmyhere chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Ack! Amazingly good! :huggles: :dances: :dance huggles:
| Hero and Bob chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
If I wasn't crying so hard I'd be leeving a longer review, but I've just got to tell you this at least; I love this story!
with all my love,
| TopKat chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
awsies...it's so nice to read something that makes ya feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside...gorgeous fic.
| LesPaul12 chapter 1 . 10/9/2005