|Reviews for Checkmating|
| Malfoy Snogger chapter 2 . 10/30/2004
This chapter was awesome! I can't get enough of Harry and Draco sneaking around. And Ron and Millie are very entertaining too. You are a very talented writer! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
| midnightprowler chapter 2 . 10/30/2004
Nice chapter, truly nice chapter, Especially the part of h/d at the end, with Draco looking alone and abandoned, only holding onto harry gift. could you write more about Draco? I feel so sorry for him. but i luved the angst. This story is turnin out to be better than your previous one. post soon!
| Tabari Avaren chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
Oh, very cute. One of very few semi-believable Harry/Draco fics out there. And, for once (praise God), Ron isn't a homophobe. He's the mastermind! You didn't make him stupid - just an insensitive git when around girls. Very well-written, excellent dialogue.
| Merit Somnia chapter 2 . 10/29/2004
While abosolutely hilarious and utterly improbabable I found that I really liked reading this. You Ron POV is such interesting insights on others and he makes me laugh. Please continue this.
| Bostonbabs chapter 2 . 10/29/2004
I am SO happy that you've written something new! It is wonderful and witty (and I hope that you will update just as often for this one as you did for your last)!
| Priestess of Silvanus chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
this is to good!
| SassMacfru chapter 2 . 10/29/2004
Ah you delivered again! One of my fav lines was this one...
He did, however, gain some insight into what the courtship between Hagrid's father and his giant mother might have been like.
Can't wait for chappie 3!
| lynntownsend chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
GUH! I like the unusual take that you've done
on this,(Ron fixing up Harry and Draco)I'll even
forgo the begging and pleading for a companion
fic to"Slytherin in Gryffindor clothing"(One of
my all time favs...even though there's no graphic
| CuriousDreamWeaver chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
Great opening! I loved it! To be honest, Ron isn't my favourite character, but he's so funny in this! Definitely and entertaining fic! I love your characterisation! Especially Ron and Millicent's! That's an odd couple, if I've ever seen one! LOL I hope you write more!
| pixyfairy120 chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
wow this story is great please update soon
| Malfoy Snogger chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
tHIS IS SUCH AN AWEWSOME IDEA FOR A STORY...I'VE NEVER READ ONE QUITE LIKE IT/ i CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS. I SIMPLY CANNOT GET ENOUGH OF MANIPULATIVE RON...
'Well, he's got those muscles and he's all lean and dangerous' ONE OF MY FAVORITE RON QUOTES OF ALL TIME!
I CAN;T WAIT FOR MORE OF THIS STORY!
P.S. SORRY ABOUT THE MESSED UP REVIEW...I JUST GOT BACK FROM THE BAR AND I COULDN'T WAIT TO REVIEW THIS FAB STORY! I AM A LITTLE TIPSY THOUGH. TYPING IS EXCEEDINGLY DIFFICULT
| SassMacfru chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
I normally don't read PG-13's but I thought I would try your story out. Im very glad I did , this is very good and it is funny. you have me hooked and I hope you update soon!