Reviews for Seven Years' Bad Luck in One Day
S1L3NTSH1NG4M1 chapter 10 . 3/21
Loved it
The Lone Swordswolf chapter 10 . 3/1
This was sweet.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/13
Love it . BbRae 4eva
wolf chapter 10 . 1/21
Good book man it was amazing
XxsparrowkeyzxX chapter 10 . 12/14/2014
I'm completely serious when I say a few tears escaped with this story, i'm choking is an absolutely incredible story, great plot and it made me show every emotion from anger to happiness to humor to and sadness that its over and happiness and humor from the positively hilarious and downright amazing lines in the script.
I think I seriously might go into a deprssion if there's not a sequel or something, but then I realize that this is already incredibly even though my mind knows its best like this, I can't help but need more this fic is so addicting.
And I know I'm ranting about this, and have already stated that this is an amazing fic but I'm if an idea comes to mind I want immediate update on a sequel or a new fic. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
This was an incredible story blew me away. I always kinda wanted to see how beast boy would react to all raven emotions.
qizhi80 chapter 8 . 8/14/2014
I have one five-letter word to describe Beast Boy right now. Raven likes to call him it a lot.
The answer is... 'Idiot'.
Marcus Nightshade chapter 10 . 8/2/2014
This was a thoroughly enjoyable story. I really enjoyed the effect that BB had on the emoticlones and how each grew as the story progressed. Thanks for having written this story!
Nessarie chapter 6 . 7/26/2014
Great story! I'm loving it so far. I do want to point out a little something concerning this chap (even though it's been years since this was written, lol): when BB was making the sentence about "me and Raven" and Raven corrects him... actually BB had it right. You only use the "and I" phrase when it's placed at the beginning of the sentence; when such a phrase is used in the middle or ending of a sentence, it is "me and" or "and me."
lunae57 chapter 10 . 6/2/2014
Ahh such a great story! I loved it :) I really like seeing all of her different sides and how much Beast Boy cares for her. Good work :D
ssjEasterBunny chapter 10 . 12/5/2013
This was quite a story! Like Concolor mentioned, I was consistently grateful that you had finished the story before I started reading. There were so many times when I was hooked, and saw from your author notes that there had apparently been months between the chapters! I actually finished the story a while ago, but was reading on my phone and never got around to getting onto my computer to leave a review. But I was reminded when it came up in conversation and I was telling a friend all about your story.

Specifically, I was telling him about the ways you split Raven's emotions in order to analyze and flush out each one. It was especially cool to see her most intense emotions split into further divisions. Honestly, I've never been a fan of the whole Nevermore concept that the fanfic community seems to be running with. Regarding that particular episode, I consider those doppelgangers to be metaphors for her emotional compartmentalization. I don't think they're 'real' parts of her, any more than I think she actually has an asteroid field or a giant maze in her mind. But even so, I very much enjoyed seeing her emotions dissected so thoroughly.

My only criticism is that Beastboy was put on a pedestal. Without any real justification, he just 'became' the person that Raven's doppelgangers all gravitated to. And he seemed to just fall into that role, whereas I would have appreciated seeing him struggle to figure out exactly 'how' to be her knight in shining armor.

I loved how you handled the Trigon component of the story. And when you first started writing this, the fourth season hadn't even aired yet! How cool that must have been for you, to see the show address some of the same conflicts you'd explored in your work.
Ashen Author chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
I liked Overload's Tried. Gone. reference. Great story idea so far.
CMB chapter 10 . 9/17/2013
Wow that was the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've just read ravenx(everybody) fanfics for a whole month. The writing was beautiful, detailed, not unrealistic but not cruelly glued to the Titan storyline. It had a plot that gripped and flowed and kept my interest while also being veried; Ive been looking for someone to successfully do the emotions to no avail until you. And the emotions... they were all comoletely true to themselves and yet at the same time wove perfectly with the plot from beginning to end. I gave up on Beastboy until this came along; it could actually happen and made me look at the couple in a completely new light. I'm blown away by how much care and time you put into this! Thank you so much for writing this to the end!
CleoArrow chapter 10 . 8/14/2013
I don't know what else to say about this story other than I loved it. Right now I have that full yet empty feeling inside that I get whenever finishing a good book. I don't want it to be over, but it made me so happy at the same time. This was wonderfully done. The characters stayed in character the whole time, and it had just the right amount of romance in it so I wasn't overwhelmed like I feel I am sometimes in stories I read.

I was recommended to read this story by a Guest who reviewed on my story and I must say that I am glad I checked your story out, because I loved it. The strange thing is that I've actually started writing something similar to this story! If I ever decide to post it (though I don't know for sure if I will) I'd just like you to know that I'm not copying your idea.

Anyways, I was so very glad to have found Seven Years' Bad Luck in One Day (the title is very clever) and must say that you are a talented author!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/31/2013
Redneck to answer your question the story is set before birthmark I think, but if Im wrong though either way it's before the end (if that makes since?) Ps by the way Great Story
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