Reviews for It's Magic
sonder this chapter 1 . 3/8
Oh my goodness, oh my god. How could I have missed this during my search for DM/DMG! This was just... MAGNIFICENCE. While I was reading this, I couldn't help but feel a melancholic air hanging about this one-shot despite the fact that it was mostly humor but perhaps it was partially attributed to the fact that we all knew what happens to them later and two parts due to Seth slapping it in our faces. I was masochistic enough to look forward to your write-up of the fall of the kingdom near the end (well, if memory serves me correctly.. if not, then ignore what I just said). But I guess a somewhat happy ending is not a bad trade off either, heh.

You captured Mana's exuberance and mischievous nature perfectly. Even Seth was funny in his own way... (at his own expense). That somber message he left her with was chilling indeed. It was interesting to see how Mana is more perceptive than she lets on - the fact that she could tell Mahaado must have been thinking about this for a long time just from his gestures alone? Impressive. I didn't interpret it that way but it's not like I had to be convinced of his wishes. His gentleness and martyr ways ... combined with such a diverse cast, this easily could have been a longer story with a lot of heartache (not necessarily due to the drama of the two's romance but what they all have to sacrifice in the end). This was beautiful and it's a sad day to see that it seems you won't be returning here anymore but regardless, I thank you for writing this and sharing it with us. One cannot complain about a completed piece.
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 2/15
This is lovely! Mana aka Black Magician Girl taking a trip to Egypt! Mahado is such a straight lace. If it was not for Atem, Kalim and Seto, God knows where these two would be. Walking on eggshells?!
Emily p chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Sooooooooo sweet! I support DM x DMG!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
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Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Awww... That was Sweet and Cute! XDD

And Seth was actually amazing to be able to know where's Mana's hearts actually lie...! He know that Mana's hearts is filled with Mahaado, not Atemu! Good observation!

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Nice ending! ;)

Love Mahaado x Mana forever!
crea-kun chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Hello dear autor, may I have this beautiful story for translating?
EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
This was really freaking awesome! I love Mana and Mahaado so much and I love how you made it not just them but DM and DMG as well. The ending was fantastic! That would have been awesome if that episode had actually ended like that. :D
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
That is... perfect. Wow. I completely enjoyed reading this.
RosiePeg chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
this is the most amazing thing... I bow to thee, author, because I was squealing and giggling the ENTIRE time I read your story. I'm ridiculously in love with it, Mahaado and Mana are my favorites, and this was just... it made my day. I'm headed to see what other things you might've written next, chances are, I'll love it as well :)
jessi chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Interesting story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Great job on this story! I loved it! :)
Harumaki chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
awwwww Mana and Atemu are so cute together ;;.

AW EFF. EFF EFF EFF. BEST FRIENDS LIKING THE SAME GIRL. AND THEY'RE BOTH WONDERFUL PEOPLE. I ALWAYS WAS A SUCKER FOR THIS SCENARIO. WAS, AM, AND, ALWAYS WILL BE. I CAN'T -readies herself to jump off of a cliff-

You make Atemu so attractive here - with his piercing gaze and what-not. Mana, good luck to you! ;_; I mean, I know how this will end, but HOW WILL IT BE DONE

Ooh, you write Seth as an excellent almost-antagonist. As a matter of fact, you write this very well, although I can't be sure how, I'm just kinda swept u in it all if you can't already tell from this review. I like the part where Seth tips her hat down. What a fascinating character.

So Atemu is physically attractive to Mana, but Mahaado is attractive on a deeper, more spiritual level...Wow. oh wait nm. Nice transition. aaaaa the resolutionnn

OMG ATEMU'S SUMMONING THEM AND IS REMINDED OF SOME OF HIS CLOSEST COMPANIONS AND MANA'S RECOGNIZING HIM UGHHH I CAN'T TAKE THIS CRAP HOLDING MY FACE RN NO LIE.

/LAUGHS AND CRIES HAPPILY AT THE ENDING /SHAMELESSLY FAVES THIS

btw you have your characterization down to a tee, this was SO SWEET. Man it's been so long since I've read fluff this gr8. You've made a Mahaado/Mana shipper out of me. Kudos to you.
ordinarygirl112233 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
very good:) i love apprenticeshipping :)
Metalmark chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
This is by far one of (if not the) best Mahaado/Mana fic ever. I loved everything about it especially the way it explored the relationships between both Atemu and the two. Although about halfway I found myself fearing that Mana would continue with her infactuation with Atemu, and the fangirl in me was smacking my head on a desk in despair. You managed to capture her slow transition in feelings from Atemu to Mahaado very well.

Oh and Mahaado's relationship with Atemu was splendid as well. Their friendship is always something I've enjoyed especially with Mahaado's loyalty to Atemu. And I found it dear that Atem so obviously treasures Mahaado enough to step back in his 'pursuit' of Mana.

Seth's part was funny as well. I mean, him of all people, making Mana realize her true feelings. He's so observant.

Amazing one-shot once again! Your way of storytelling is very brilliant and enjoyable.
christianqueenofegypt chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
sings* it's magic...you know...never believe it's not so...*

Lol excellent job! _
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